Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Chapter 18 A"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from Jay Squires
Good, she's getting better.
"Almost a half-an-hour later" [I know this is from the previous chapter, but I think you'll find it's either "Almost half-an-hour later," or "Almost a half-hour later."]
It smells like strawberries. [Is he hooked, or what?]
She set them on the table, as Carl hugged her and Seth asked, [Technically, you have him hugging her while she is setting them on the table.]
I'll miss you if you don't post, next week, but I understand.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Good, she's getting better.
"Almost a half-an-hour later" [I know this is from the previous chapter, but I think you'll find it's either "Almost half-an-hour later," or "Almost a half-hour later."]
It smells like strawberries. [Is he hooked, or what?]
She set them on the table, as Carl hugged her and Seth asked, [Technically, you have him hugging her while she is setting them on the table.]
I'll miss you if you don't post, next week, but I understand.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll fix both those areas. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, you have to wait until your characters tell you how Emma got out of the tub? I still can't get over Ace and he carries a bag with a dog treat to his master without stopping for a bite. Emma doesn't know how much training Ace has had. He is really one of your best characters in this because everything he does is amazing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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So, you have to wait until your characters tell you how Emma got out of the tub? I still can't get over Ace and he carries a bag with a dog treat to his master without stopping for a bite. Emma doesn't know how much training Ace has had. He is really one of your best characters in this because everything he does is amazing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. My character write the story. Emma never mentioned the tub again.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ok. I'm starting to see some involuntary flirting between the two now. The texts were kind of flirty and watching each other for the reaction was very flirtatious. Seth reminds me of the guy in school who's falling for someone but denying it every step of the way. Lol. Very cute. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Ok. I'm starting to see some involuntary flirting between the two now. The texts were kind of flirty and watching each other for the reaction was very flirtatious. Seth reminds me of the guy in school who's falling for someone but denying it every step of the way. Lol. Very cute. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Another fine chapter Barbara, well written and these lovers are certainly taking it one step at a time and I wonder if they will ever really get together? I liked the photograph too, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Another fine chapter Barbara, well written and these lovers are certainly taking it one step at a time and I wonder if they will ever really get together? I liked the photograph too, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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They will get together, eventually. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JT traveller
The attic bedroom illustration is beautiful and romantic. It was a perfect fit for your chapter which discusses colour switches and repainting Emma's bedroom. Captivating and very well written. I have learnt so much from you, Barbara and continue to learn. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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The attic bedroom illustration is beautiful and romantic. It was a perfect fit for your chapter which discusses colour switches and repainting Emma's bedroom. Captivating and very well written. I have learnt so much from you, Barbara and continue to learn. Jacqueline
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from jmdg1954
A good continuing chapter. I'm guessing in romance novels, the pace is slower, similar to watching a movie on the Hallmark station. Drives me nuts, but if that's the way it is, I accept.
At least Emma was more respectful in this chapter.
Enjoy your trip away...
Caio
John
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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A good continuing chapter. I'm guessing in romance novels, the pace is slower, similar to watching a movie on the Hallmark station. Drives me nuts, but if that's the way it is, I accept.
At least Emma was more respectful in this chapter.
Enjoy your trip away...
Caio
John
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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There are different types of romance novels. Some move very quickly, I choose the more traditional. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day and enjoy your granddaughters.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day and enjoy your granddaughters.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Another well written and interesting chapter! I truly look forward to this story each week and I will miss it next week.
Have a safe trip anda Wonder visit with your little sweethearts!!
See you here soon,
Alexandra :)) x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Another well written and interesting chapter! I truly look forward to this story each week and I will miss it next week.
Have a safe trip anda Wonder visit with your little sweethearts!!
See you here soon,
Alexandra :)) x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Good seeing you. Last chapter was good but I missed it for some reason. I see Ulla is diverted again but Sally is on earlier this week. Interesting to see where it goes with the errant driver's father.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Good seeing you. Last chapter was good but I missed it for some reason. I see Ulla is diverted again but Sally is on earlier this week. Interesting to see where it goes with the errant driver's father.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice continuation of the story, Barb. How much longer are you going to drag this courtship out? I think the readers are getting anxious to get things moving.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Nice continuation of the story, Barb. How much longer are you going to drag this courtship out? I think the readers are getting anxious to get things moving.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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This courtship has only been going on a little over two weeks, so not that long really. Thank you for the kind review.
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Sorry to be so impatient.
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LOL not a problem. I like to develop a romance, first. It seems more real to me. It may be just me.
