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The Saga of Procrastination

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Comment from BethShelby
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I love you conversation with your alter-ego or shadow. She really gives you a hard time. I imagine on-line dating could be a real headache but I hear there are some real romances something. You must have gotten another cat. Last I heard you only had one.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Yup this time i got a baby cure little girl
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is cute and creative. I enjoyed reading. One of my sons met his wife through on-line dating. They have been married for nine years and have two adorable little girls. I am not a fan of on-line dating but in their case it worked.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Well my first husband was part of the on-line discovery dating plan, we got married I came to Canada and now is over... and as you can see Im back in square one...full circle:)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Funny you writing about a dating service. I worked for one. Compatibility Unlimited in Houston, Texas in 1986. When I joined the company I had to fill out a form like everyone else did. I was immediately matched to someone 98%. the highest match they ever had. We dated and married within 6 months. This lasted 3.5 years I divorced him. Married someone else. stayed with him 9 years left him came back to Houston, ex-husband met the plane and I am still married to him although we have been separated for a year,this time 23 years, we are joined but he can not see past my limitations. Said for him. I have known him for 37 years.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

Comment from lancellot
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I think your look into dating and self is interesting, but some editing is needed.

notes:

"It's this the fable of the fox that when doesn't reach the grapes, she says are sour?"

-"Is this the fable of the fox, that when she can't reach the grapes, she says they are sour?"


"Well, why don't you go back to earth first?

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"Well, why don't you come back to earth first?

Before you ask the sun and the moon, see if you can get them on your own on all fronts, not just the traveling portion.

- I would look at this line again.

If you want to look good, instead of talking about it, why don't you go into a workout routine and keep it no matter what?

-If you want to look good. Instead of talking about it, start a workout routine and keep it no matter what?

Likes and messages, what the heck are we back {to} school?"

-Likes and messages, what the heck are we back in school?"

"Well, if you are so frustrated, cancel the damn service, and {let} everything in God's hands.

-"Well, if you are so frustrated, cancel the damn service, and leave everything in God's hands.



{Talked} them to death if you have to.

-Talk them to death if you have to.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much for your corrections and review:)
Comment from lyenochka
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Your old shadow is so smart. I like " If you want to find true love, you must learn to love yourself and, most importantly, to accept and recognize your weaknesses" and remember those online dating sites are also full of people trying to lure women to rob them. Please be careful.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
    No worries, I think I will say pass to this dating business, and stop spending money on something fake:)