The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from BethShelby
This story was beautifully written Sally. You even died and were resurected by an angel who many saw. You even had the major criminal have a life-changing experience. I've really enjoyed the story. There was a lot of romance in it as well. I look forward to the epilogue.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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This story was beautifully written Sally. You even died and were resurected by an angel who many saw. You even had the major criminal have a life-changing experience. I've really enjoyed the story. There was a lot of romance in it as well. I look forward to the epilogue.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely reviewmwnd compliments. I just posted the epilogue today. Love and blessings, and a Happy Birthday too!
Sal XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
Girl, you did well with this story. The fire scene was fantastic. I could feel the heat from the flames. So the Angel came on the scene. I will buy that. Good one Sal. Enjoyed your story.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Girl, you did well with this story. The fire scene was fantastic. I could feel the heat from the flames. So the Angel came on the scene. I will buy that. Good one Sal. Enjoyed your story.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and suprt kind stars. I am blessed. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, what a turn-around for Fee! He has truly been inspired and overawed by Sally's heroic actions of saving him from the fire and the miracle of the angel's breath of life into her dying body. His transformation becomes even more pronounced during the Court sentencing when he accepts the maximum sentence appropriate and has even written letters of reparation. There are 2 small edits I think: "And for pity sake put on you(r) shirt" and 'vers(u)s' This is an excellently expressed chapter with all the elements of drama, humour and calming Court proceedings. Well done, Sally! Debbie x
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Wow, what a turn-around for Fee! He has truly been inspired and overawed by Sally's heroic actions of saving him from the fire and the miracle of the angel's breath of life into her dying body. His transformation becomes even more pronounced during the Court sentencing when he accepts the maximum sentence appropriate and has even written letters of reparation. There are 2 small edits I think: "And for pity sake put on you(r) shirt" and 'vers(u)s' This is an excellently expressed chapter with all the elements of drama, humour and calming Court proceedings. Well done, Sally! Debbie x
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you formtje wonderful reviewmwnd your kind readership. I just now posted the epilogue. Love and blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from BermyBye50
Sally,
This is an excellent final chapter to your book The Aspen Grove Murders. I've admired your skillful writing from afar. Your mastery is evidenced in this creative write and is confirmation of a highly accomplished and talented novelist. This is guaranteed to be listed as the number one book on a future New York Times best seller list.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Sally,
This is an excellent final chapter to your book The Aspen Grove Murders. I've admired your skillful writing from afar. Your mastery is evidenced in this creative write and is confirmation of a highly accomplished and talented novelist. This is guaranteed to be listed as the number one book on a future New York Times best seller list.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Dear Eugene, Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter. The stars are pretty pleasing too. How kind you are!
Sending you my best today as always, and best for the week.
Sal :))
Comment from JSD
Excellent climactic narrative Sally. Really well done. I loved the action of the fire and the intervention from above, moving to the calm of the court. Such effective writing. You are a marvel.
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Excellent climactic narrative Sally. Really well done. I loved the action of the fire and the intervention from above, moving to the calm of the court. Such effective writing. You are a marvel.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Dear John, Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, my friend! How kind you are! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the week. Sal XOs
