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As always ...28 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader. I loved the dialogues too.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader. I loved the dialogues too.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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I'm glad you found this one interesting and enjoyable to read. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Wendy
Comment from JSD
Yes, well done for learning so well. Good mistress. And I'm glad we have solved the mystery of the meatball removal. I was worrying about that, after laughing a great deal. They are such wonderful friends aren't they. My partner and dog are way at the moment and we face-timed. I called her name and she came running to lick the phone.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Yes, well done for learning so well. Good mistress. And I'm glad we have solved the mystery of the meatball removal. I was worrying about that, after laughing a great deal. They are such wonderful friends aren't they. My partner and dog are way at the moment and we face-timed. I called her name and she came running to lick the phone.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you for this beautiful review. How absolutely wonderful that she came running to lick the phone. What a fabulous proof of love! They are so important in our lives.
Wendy
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I'm afraid that's about right, the dogs (animals) rule the show.
Nicely written. Good work.
The pets are not about to change. They run the show. Best to have no meetings in my opinion. At least you would save yourself the embarrassment of bowing to them.
smiley face here
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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I'm afraid that's about right, the dogs (animals) rule the show.
Nicely written. Good work.
The pets are not about to change. They run the show. Best to have no meetings in my opinion. At least you would save yourself the embarrassment of bowing to them.
smiley face here
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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You are right. No more meetings. Lol. Thanks so much for your review - I always appreciated it.
Wendy
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Wendy,
thanks for sharing the thoughts of Sunny with us. It's interesting to see the different spin that he puts on activities. I admire you for taking such good care of him. We spoiled our dog to no end. It got so bad that in the morning when I ate a bowl of cereal, he had to have some as well, and it had to have milk on it or he would give me the evil eye. The kids thought he was out of control, but I thought he was just right.
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Hello Wendy,
thanks for sharing the thoughts of Sunny with us. It's interesting to see the different spin that he puts on activities. I admire you for taking such good care of him. We spoiled our dog to no end. It got so bad that in the morning when I ate a bowl of cereal, he had to have some as well, and it had to have milk on it or he would give me the evil eye. The kids thought he was out of control, but I thought he was just right.
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Lol. We always think our dogs are "just right" and they are, they are perfect for us. Thanks so much for reviewing. I enjoyed your response!
Wendy
Comment from kahpot
Absolutely adorable, you cover the desires and expectations of both characters (I know it is you and your puppy) the communication in this story tells of the love you both have for each other, an excellent read, thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Absolutely adorable, you cover the desires and expectations of both characters (I know it is you and your puppy) the communication in this story tells of the love you both have for each other, an excellent read, thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Kahpot. I enjoyed your very nice review, and I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Wendy
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And many thanks too for the six stars. That is very special.
Wendy
Comment from Julie Lau
This is so cute! You have a great ability to read the doggy mind. Simple and straight-forward, yet it's so difficult to change those annoying habits. I know that Flora brings her food under my dining/writing chair to be with me, but the floor mat is starting to look disgusting. Oh well, better a faithful dog than an immaculate mat!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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This is so cute! You have a great ability to read the doggy mind. Simple and straight-forward, yet it's so difficult to change those annoying habits. I know that Flora brings her food under my dining/writing chair to be with me, but the floor mat is starting to look disgusting. Oh well, better a faithful dog than an immaculate mat!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. Love your review, and yes the priority is love over a clean floor mat. Thank you too for the six very shiny stars. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Pantygynt
I think you've got that dog of yours thoroughly taped.
I think that dog of yours has got you thoroughly taped.
Clearly you were made for each other and for a large quantity of tape!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I think you've got that dog of yours thoroughly taped.
I think that dog of yours has got you thoroughly taped.
Clearly you were made for each other and for a large quantity of tape!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much Jim. A fun review. Much enjoyed.
Wendy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Delightful! "When you cook a delicious piece of pork, chicken, steak, or sausage or bacon, I find it hard not to resort to begging, which is a bit undignified."
"Sunny: I was just taking them to where you were. I just wanted to be with you!" -- awwwwwwww!!!
"You do tend to stop frequently when we walk, and every few metres you seem to spend some time sniffing." -- Yer killin' me!!!!!
I am so completely and thoroughly charmed by this adorable story... I only wish I (still) had a six available to rate this as it so richly deserves.
I have only one, small suggestion, and it is because a highly-regarded editor of a prestigious publishing house once said the same to me -- exclamation marks should only be used for short, terse things, like a command = "Stop!"
Best of luck in the contest with this wonderful entry.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Delightful! "When you cook a delicious piece of pork, chicken, steak, or sausage or bacon, I find it hard not to resort to begging, which is a bit undignified."
"Sunny: I was just taking them to where you were. I just wanted to be with you!" -- awwwwwwww!!!
"You do tend to stop frequently when we walk, and every few metres you seem to spend some time sniffing." -- Yer killin' me!!!!!
I am so completely and thoroughly charmed by this adorable story... I only wish I (still) had a six available to rate this as it so richly deserves.
I have only one, small suggestion, and it is because a highly-regarded editor of a prestigious publishing house once said the same to me -- exclamation marks should only be used for short, terse things, like a command = "Stop!"
Best of luck in the contest with this wonderful entry.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you Dawn, for your super review. It made me very happy that you enjoyed the story. As for the exclamation marks, you are right, and I will go back and edit. I have a bad habit of overdoing them. And I very nearly used another one at the end of that sentence ....
Wendy
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Hahaha -- welcome to MY world. :) I satisfy my need to exclaim where I'm only having conversations with other writers. :)))
Comment from Teri7
This is just too cute and adorable what you have penned for the Family Meeting event in Animal Crackers event. You used very cute and good dialogue between you and Sunny. Thank you for the smile tonight! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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This is just too cute and adorable what you have penned for the Family Meeting event in Animal Crackers event. You used very cute and good dialogue between you and Sunny. Thank you for the smile tonight! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much Teri. I am so glad you enjoyed our little family meeting - which was basically him reminding me of who is boss! Lol.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad that Sunny is pleased with you Wendy, and that it all worked that he is a brilliant teacher and you are a very quick learner, that certainly warms the cockles my dog's ear. Beautifully written Wendy a good post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I'm so glad that Sunny is pleased with you Wendy, and that it all worked that he is a brilliant teacher and you are a very quick learner, that certainly warms the cockles my dog's ear. Beautifully written Wendy a good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you Roy. Yes, he has a way of turning everything to his own advantage, and I think for him I am a bit of a pushover.
Wendy
