The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Now why would he let his guard down so easily? I find it a little hard to believe that this wise guy would act so dumb.
That aside, this is well written and the dialogue is very good. I feel as though we are coming to an end with this fine story - just have to get through the mysterious fire first.
Until next week, my dear:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Now why would he let his guard down so easily? I find it a little hard to believe that this wise guy would act so dumb.
That aside, this is well written and the dialogue is very good. I feel as though we are coming to an end with this fine story - just have to get through the mysterious fire first.
Until next week, my dear:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars, my friend. Yep, he's let his guard down but more to come.
The finale is tomorrow.
Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs
Comment from estory
Nice job with this action packed chapter. It really got going as the criminal discovers the old shack and the old man inside, and breaks in and wheels him into a spare room. The two detectives seem to get dragged into the same trap, but Sally turns the tables magnificently in that bedroom, and kicks the kid out of the window to his demise. I loved all the details here, the discriptions of the house and the old man, the snarling dialogue from the criminal, the aplomb of the detectives. And you put plenty of personality in the dialogue too. estory
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Nice job with this action packed chapter. It really got going as the criminal discovers the old shack and the old man inside, and breaks in and wheels him into a spare room. The two detectives seem to get dragged into the same trap, but Sally turns the tables magnificently in that bedroom, and kicks the kid out of the window to his demise. I loved all the details here, the discriptions of the house and the old man, the snarling dialogue from the criminal, the aplomb of the detectives. And you put plenty of personality in the dialogue too. estory
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, estory. I appreciate your kind review and excellent rating. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Ooooooh mmmmmyyyyyyyy GGGoosssshhhh. WOWZA, what a chapter and what a wonderful way to capture him. I gasped at the scene of the possible rape, but the way Sally handled it, saying she also dreamed of this day, I knew she was going to give it to him, but not what he thought. I think I got a head of myself, but this was too good. The beginning was great too, but this part was amazing. You just keep having those manicures, girl!! Lol.... But now with the house on fire and the old man is in the bedroom in a wheelchair. Oh Sally, save him somehow first. Grab your watch and call someone fast. I know she could get out safely as I am sure she has been trained for this, but that poor old man. Yet, I am sure he is already on your mind. But does she know about him? BRAVO, BRAVO to this chapter and ENCORE ENCORE!! I am loving this one so much! What an abundance of excitement and thrilling happenings that kept me on the edge of my chair. Awesome job my beautiful friend. One more word for it: GENIUS!!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Ooooooh mmmmmyyyyyyyy GGGoosssshhhh. WOWZA, what a chapter and what a wonderful way to capture him. I gasped at the scene of the possible rape, but the way Sally handled it, saying she also dreamed of this day, I knew she was going to give it to him, but not what he thought. I think I got a head of myself, but this was too good. The beginning was great too, but this part was amazing. You just keep having those manicures, girl!! Lol.... But now with the house on fire and the old man is in the bedroom in a wheelchair. Oh Sally, save him somehow first. Grab your watch and call someone fast. I know she could get out safely as I am sure she has been trained for this, but that poor old man. Yet, I am sure he is already on your mind. But does she know about him? BRAVO, BRAVO to this chapter and ENCORE ENCORE!! I am loving this one so much! What an abundance of excitement and thrilling happenings that kept me on the edge of my chair. Awesome job my beautiful friend. One more word for it: GENIUS!!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Dearest friend, thank you for beautiful review and cherished stats. I'm so very blessed and honored to have you close. Stay tuned for the finale. Sending you my best today as always.
Love, BBB The Blind Detective XOs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great chapter Sally as your namesake kicks FEE into submission. Your descriptions created a very visual scene and I could easily picture Detective Sally's prowess. Well told, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Great chapter Sally as your namesake kicks FEE into submission. Your descriptions created a very visual scene and I could easily picture Detective Sally's prowess. Well told, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Dear Valda, thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars! I'm so honored, my friend. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs
Comment from BethShelby
The blind lady is very impressive. I understant why her husband said that she is the weapon. Does she know aboug the old man in the wheelchair. I'm wondering why the house is one fire. It much be something that Fee did to cause the fire. You've left us with a clift hanger. I look forward to the next chapter. The story is very exciting.
Betg
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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The blind lady is very impressive. I understant why her husband said that she is the weapon. Does she know aboug the old man in the wheelchair. I'm wondering why the house is one fire. It much be something that Fee did to cause the fire. You've left us with a clift hanger. I look forward to the next chapter. The story is very exciting.
Betg
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
Wow1 She handled that right. The old boy thought he was going to have his pleasure but got the surprise of his life. Good wook Girl. That will lern hin . nOW THE PLACE IS ON FIRE.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Wow1 She handled that right. The old boy thought he was going to have his pleasure but got the surprise of his life. Good wook Girl. That will lern hin . nOW THE PLACE IS ON FIRE.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Dear Ben, thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars! I'm so honored, my friend. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Man, you just let me suspended wondering what's next? Would the old guy be saved, what about Sally? Will the police and firefighters came before is too late?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Man, you just let me suspended wondering what's next? Would the old guy be saved, what about Sally? Will the police and firefighters came before is too late?
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Iza dear, thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars! I'm so honored, my friend. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a chapter this is. Can't wait to see where it goes and hope Jackson is still handy or getting help. A few changes suggested. Everyone had on a protective vest[s], and w(as)[ere] weaponized,...edits ie vest as opposed to vests and was as opposed to were and due to the singular group "everyone"
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Wow! What a chapter this is. Can't wait to see where it goes and hope Jackson is still handy or getting help. A few changes suggested. Everyone had on a protective vest[s], and w(as)[ere] weaponized,...edits ie vest as opposed to vests and was as opposed to were and due to the singular group "everyone"
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Dear Geoff, thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars! I'm so honored, my friend. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs
Comment from poetwatch
Ah, Sally, you almost had to post a rated R on this one. :) Though truth be told the whipping the blind detective gave Fee was for free and it was violent. :) She should just tie him up and leave him there so he can have a taste of hell. Good story, Sally.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Ah, Sally, you almost had to post a rated R on this one. :) Though truth be told the whipping the blind detective gave Fee was for free and it was violent. :) She should just tie him up and leave him there so he can have a taste of hell. Good story, Sally.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Loren .
You keep both the action and suspense going, Sally. Not that I am any Pollyanna, but I was curious how you would handle the sex and violence warning. But I will say you did it with finesse. I especially liked the quotes you used at the beginning. It was somehow comforting. Loren
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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You keep both the action and suspense going, Sally. Not that I am any Pollyanna, but I was curious how you would handle the sex and violence warning. But I will say you did it with finesse. I especially liked the quotes you used at the beginning. It was somehow comforting. Loren
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Dear Loren, thank you for the lovely review and kind and generous stars! I'm so honored, my friend.
Blessings to you and yours,
Sal XOs
