Suns glow
Moment in time9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on your win. I can see why both the words and the beautiful sunset picture. It compliments your words of a sunset as a art form.
I have been to St. Johns to see my Grandparents' homeland and am impressed with the city and its people. I can see how Nana missed NFLD.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Congratulations on your win. I can see why both the words and the beautiful sunset picture. It compliments your words of a sunset as a art form.
I have been to St. Johns to see my Grandparents' homeland and am impressed with the city and its people. I can see how Nana missed NFLD.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore sunsets and they seem to send a message at the close of say that the sun will return to delight us very soon, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I adore sunsets and they seem to send a message at the close of say that the sun will return to delight us very soon, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This is succinct and beautiful - my favourite in the contest. I think I would have made the title the same as the first line, if I'd been writing it, as that would give a better idea of what the poem was about.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This is succinct and beautiful - my favourite in the contest. I think I would have made the title the same as the first line, if I'd been writing it, as that would give a better idea of what the poem was about.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
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You're welcome, and hey, we both won!
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Sun's Glow, has the proper formatting and pays homage to this sight which evokes so many feelings of awe for the power of life and its meaning.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This 2-5-2, Sun's Glow, has the proper formatting and pays homage to this sight which evokes so many feelings of awe for the power of life and its meaning.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2/5/2 prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Excellent entry for the 2/5/2 prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading your excellent poem I particularly like that you use the phrase art form. I'm a fine artist and I understand what you mean. Your presentation goes well, words and image, together.
I could relate to the feeling of art in nature. Beautiful.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed reading your excellent poem I particularly like that you use the phrase art form. I'm a fine artist and I understand what you mean. Your presentation goes well, words and image, together.
I could relate to the feeling of art in nature. Beautiful.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from JSD
Sun's?
A lovely piece with a gorgeous photo. Yours? You have fitted a great deal into these few syllables and I like the use of metaphor in the last line. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Sun's?
A lovely piece with a gorgeous photo. Yours? You have fitted a great deal into these few syllables and I like the use of metaphor in the last line. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Excellently done poet. These shorter forms can be so challenging but you've handled this splendidly! I haven't read any others yet but this should do well!
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Excellently done poet. These shorter forms can be so challenging but you've handled this splendidly! I haven't read any others yet but this should do well!
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from jim vecchio
God certainly paints beautiful images in the sky! You also selected a very appropriate photo highlighting your tender words about the sunset. As God loves us and gifts us with these sunsets, we so much more enjoy them if we have someone we love to share them with.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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God certainly paints beautiful images in the sky! You also selected a very appropriate photo highlighting your tender words about the sunset. As God loves us and gifts us with these sunsets, we so much more enjoy them if we have someone we love to share them with.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
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Thank you for your beautiful work!