2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "It's a Long Winter Night".
7 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and indeed, your house could be located in Death Valley and it would still seem dark and cold when losing a lover. A sad reality for a lot of us
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and indeed, your house could be located in Death Valley and it would still seem dark and cold when losing a lover. A sad reality for a lot of us
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh dark. i like dark poems.
the refrains worked well in this free verse
and the imagery and words flowed smoothly
good emotions -- "No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader." - Robert Frost
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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ooh dark. i like dark poems.
the refrains worked well in this free verse
and the imagery and words flowed smoothly
good emotions -- "No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader." - Robert Frost
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Thank you for the quote. I love it.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem- excellent picture presentation- poem flows well - story is a sad tale of loneliness, grief and hopelessness - moving towards letting go of the past and moving on with life -Good Job - AP
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I like your free verse poem- excellent picture presentation- poem flows well - story is a sad tale of loneliness, grief and hopelessness - moving towards letting go of the past and moving on with life -Good Job - AP
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is a poem of loss, and a poem that many people can relate to. Of special note:
my home is dark and cold
(Unfortunately, any home without love is dark and cold, even if it's filled with people. )
Good sensory appeal. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Hi Gypsy, this is a poem of loss, and a poem that many people can relate to. Of special note:
my home is dark and cold
(Unfortunately, any home without love is dark and cold, even if it's filled with people. )
Good sensory appeal. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
I like the way your dark blue graphics portray a sense of coldness and loss. The way you describe that loss is really exceptional when you use the phrase 'Winter's Night. Both words paint a picture of cold emptiness and loss.
I hope life is treating you well.
Have a great Subday.
Cubdy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Gypsy,
I like the way your dark blue graphics portray a sense of coldness and loss. The way you describe that loss is really exceptional when you use the phrase 'Winter's Night. Both words paint a picture of cold emptiness and loss.
I hope life is treating you well.
Have a great Subday.
Cubdy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That is very sad because the love for the departed one still remains. That makes it so much harder to let him go and move on. The coldness of winter doesn't help, and echoes the aloneness.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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That is very sad because the love for the departed one still remains. That makes it so much harder to let him go and move on. The coldness of winter doesn't help, and echoes the aloneness.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is a very sad poem. The narrator just can't quite let go. There seems to be a welcome cocoon of darkness for this person. The pain is almost comforting. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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This is a very sad poem. The narrator just can't quite let go. There seems to be a welcome cocoon of darkness for this person. The pain is almost comforting. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy