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Viewing comments for Chapter 83 "Gateway to Deception"
Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?

38 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
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I remember this P.I. slash love story. Congratulations, on getting this out on the market. I'm sure your fans will enjoy mixed genre and the happy ending with wedding bells.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your support. There is promise of wedding bells, but at the end of the novel Logan is being deployed for who knows how long.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Awesome! You are moving forward, Barbara. As in most things in life, if you aren't advancing then you are retreating.

Proud of you, my friend.
Douglas

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your support.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Your summation was well told and peaked a bit of interest from me.

Good luck, go and sell 100,000 copies and make The NY Times best seller list!

Woo-hoo,
Cheers to many book sales.
John

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your support. I was shocked when my published said something about the New York Times. I think he's in some other land. LOL
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I remember enjoying this book. I forget how it all ends up?? Could I get it on Kindle? Something missing in Background? Background
More than anything McKenzie wants to trust Logan, but life experience tells her not to. While they search for his sister's murderer, they grow closer, but people have disappointed her before. Will s(??)

My characters have minds of their own[s]

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the support. I don't do Kindle only paperback. The Will s is because I had too many letters. LOL I have deleted that made the other correction.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Looking forward to the new story, Barb. Sounds like it could be quite interesting. Are we going to get more from Seth and Emma? That was getting interesting.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    This one isn't new it's old. It's now published. Thank you for the support.
Comment from royowen
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Of course I've read the series that you posted here Barbara, and I know it to be a fabulous story, well done with your success with this, it is a worthwhile read, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : I(t) hasn't been completely...

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the catch. When I read over it, I read it as 'It'. I appreciate the help and support.
reply by royowen on 10-Aug-2023
    Most welcome
Comment from estory
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Well good luck with it. Hopefully it will do well. I think I remember this story; it had all of your usual hallmarks, good character definition, great crisp dialogue, intrigue, tense moments and romance. I'm still editing my novel, who knows when I will go down the self publishing path. I'm afraid of scams. estory

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    I appreciate the help and support.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Barbara,

Congratulations!!!! Another book! that's a huge accomplishment. I hope you celebrate. I wish the best for you.

I admire you, you are an excellent author. Prose is not my forte...it's very hard.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    I appreciate the help and support.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds like an exciting thriller Barbara and I wish you luck with the novel. I wish you luck with the sales too.

Missing word here:

I wanted to let (you) know that Gateway to Deception is published and on Amazon.com.

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    I appreciate the help and support. I tend to leave out words and when I reread it, I pretend the word is there. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Congratulations on the publication of your novel! Publication has a lot of similarities to giving birth I find. Euphoria and at the same time exhaustion, but immediately ready to start again. kay

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    I appreciate the help and support.