A Fuller Life
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Jay, so very true my sweet friend...
we get back what we put in...
work hard and
just stay on the straight and narrow ...
believe in yourself...and He will take you
home...
I love your poem sweet guy...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
Hi Jay, so very true my sweet friend...
we get back what we put in...
work hard and
just stay on the straight and narrow ...
believe in yourself...and He will take you
home...
I love your poem sweet guy...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
A Fuller Life is a lovely sonnet and a beautiful message for all of us Jay.
You are definitely right - There is no better way to live your life.
Blessings
Janet
A Fuller Life is a lovely sonnet and a beautiful message for all of us Jay.
You are definitely right - There is no better way to live your life.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Yep. That makes sense. Then again, when is it you haven't ? Maybe it is the maturity gained with nearly ten decades to claim. You are one of a kind, but then aren't we all, even twins. I saw Debbie's tribute poem. At least you have fans!
Yep. That makes sense. Then again, when is it you haven't ? Maybe it is the maturity gained with nearly ten decades to claim. You are one of a kind, but then aren't we all, even twins. I saw Debbie's tribute poem. At least you have fans!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Good advice for all and meaningful to know you are writing from the experience of a life well lived. The poem showcases your trademark poetic skill. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Good advice for all and meaningful to know you are writing from the experience of a life well lived. The poem showcases your trademark poetic skill. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Jay,
Every time I happen on a poem of yours I am delighted.
Wow, close to 100 years old and still writing! My father lived to be 96 and was sharp as a tack.
I am 75 and very healthy so who knows, I might live a long life.
I believe in giving your life the biggest try.
Really enjoyed your poem Jay,
Lisasview
Good morning Jay,
Every time I happen on a poem of yours I am delighted.
Wow, close to 100 years old and still writing! My father lived to be 96 and was sharp as a tack.
I am 75 and very healthy so who knows, I might live a long life.
I believe in giving your life the biggest try.
Really enjoyed your poem Jay,
Lisasview
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your poems, besides being well-written with good rhyme, always show such simple wisdom. Your voice is clear and unpretentious, and your words show us the depth of your feeling for life. God bless.
Your poems, besides being well-written with good rhyme, always show such simple wisdom. Your voice is clear and unpretentious, and your words show us the depth of your feeling for life. God bless.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
Comment from Mia Twysted
As always very positive. You are always finding ways to inspire your reader with clear words and a great message about life and its lessons. Hope this finds you well.
As always very positive. You are always finding ways to inspire your reader with clear words and a great message about life and its lessons. Hope this finds you well.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have a wonderful attitude toward life which may be part of the reason you've been around a long time, even longer than me. Your poem is the work of a man who has lived a good life. Well done.
You have a wonderful attitude toward life which may be part of the reason you've been around a long time, even longer than me. Your poem is the work of a man who has lived a good life. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I like your stuff. I appreciate upbeat poetry that rhymes too. I like limericks the most. Not the naughty ones, I just like the flow. You also write with a good flow. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.
I like your stuff. I appreciate upbeat poetry that rhymes too. I like limericks the most. Not the naughty ones, I just like the flow. You also write with a good flow. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
Comment from Heather Knight
This is good advice. Sometimes it's tough, but we must keep going.
There are many good things in life, but also tough ones.
Great poem as usual. Thanks for sharing
This is good advice. Sometimes it's tough, but we must keep going.
There are many good things in life, but also tough ones.
Great poem as usual. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023