Comment from PteGIJane

Excellent

This is a brilliant use of dialogue with the systems of the body to diagnosis kidney stones. If only diagnosis were that easy in the real sense. I also found your writing comical in how you approached the subject. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Hi PteGIJane, thanks so much for your thoughts. Dave

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was written especially and exceptionally, rich and theme and rich and an imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Hi Doctor Ricky, thanks for your thoughts and take care!Dave

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Love it. Wish I had a six for the creativity of this breaking news broadcast. I've had family members that have passed kidney stones. I was told by one that it was as painful as childbirth. Ouch! And best of luck to the host.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Hi w.j. debi, thanks for your thoughts and have heard the same about passing a K.S. Take care, Dave

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very cute and creative! I was interested from the title because I have MS so my central nervous system betrays me and has for 30 years now. I had fun reading your interesting dialogue and story. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Hi Alexandra, thanks so much for your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed my story and take care Take care, Dave