Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A very well written Haiku. I love the contrast in the picture with the raging sea and the bottle adrift in calm waters. Her passion is stronger and survives the raging sea.
Beautiful imagery and words.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This Haiku was very well written rich in Theme and imagery.
Another excellent written work with beautiful artwork just like every one of yours. Gypsy.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed weekend
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Ricky1024 on 29-Jul-2023

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was an amazing haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were fantastic-the first showed the raging sea and the second showed the calm sea with the bottle and the message. Your words were perfect. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 27-Jul-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haiku poem -Excellent picture presentation (as usual) -good syllable count and flow - metaphors intriguing - poem - her method expression - bottled inside the bubble of her unique life's circumstance - inside raging ;( highly motivated) to channel her human mind - filled to brim with emotion / passion as untamable as the ocean -nice Good Job- AP

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Exceptional writing! A poem in a bottle over the waves is truly symbolic of our fragile hearts navigating life's circumstances. The presentation in beautiful and supports your thoughtfully chosen words. Best wishes! Alexan x

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Love xoxo
Marival

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Your poem certainly describes the ocean. Untamable even on its calmest day. This was an awesome poem the showed the ocean as a racing dragon rather than a body of water. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

this was an excellent haiku with great imagery
i could totally see that bottle floating in the waves
(always wanted to find one lol)
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm glad that her "untamable passion" is expressed in the poem and that the words can surf any amount of the ocean's raging waves in hopes to reach the beloved one.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, big sister, I always appreciate for your reviews and kind words.

Love xoxo
Marival