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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

You should always be applauded for your choice of artwork and coloring scheme. This Haiku presentation is really good. Do like your s-letter alliterative flourishes.

Mark

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were great. One of the starry night and the moonflowers. It was great that you mentioned the night and the flowers. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us. I am a huge fan of stars. They not lonely illuminate the night sky, they give us sense of peace, well-being. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I hope you have a great weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Haiku poem - Nice sublime picture presentation of the stars/ night skies. Good syllable count and flow - Good notes explaining - sentients' good word - thinking the moon flowers could be a constellation too - good connection with the moon. Wonder how many people take the time to look at the night sky - when very young the Rosicrucian Egyptian Museum had a replica of the night ski high on the ceiling like in an auditorium -people would sit below and look up as they explained - at the end they would a eject a water mist from the ceiling that would drop on us - we thought it the coolest part lol. Good Job. AP

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    That sounds like fun. We have an observatory with the same thing...it's very cool.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Lovely haiku! Beautifully illustrated. Night blooming flowers sense the moonlight and respond.

Question :
delights sentients' below
I don't think you need the apostrophe

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review, big sister. I fixed it!

    Love xoxo

    Marival

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I will have to look up to find a picture of a moon flower. The moonlight casts a surreal light o things when it stones. Fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i like the S alliteration - flows smoothly
good imagery of the white stars and white moonflowers
nice haiku
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Shelley. :)

    Gypsy hugs