My Notes From Above The Ground.
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Who is Arranging Events of My Li"A collection of episods of a Homeless Woman.
2 total reviews
Comment from Nina Sexton
Good beginning so far. I would suggest using a professional editor before publishing as there were some formatting, grammatical and punctuation issues throughout. The poem grasped by attention by far as I thought it clever and concise.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Good beginning so far. I would suggest using a professional editor before publishing as there were some formatting, grammatical and punctuation issues throughout. The poem grasped by attention by far as I thought it clever and concise.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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A review made without giving actual examples of some if not all errors is worthless and shows a poor, condescending, nose up in the air, attitude. I use editing software for producing the work, but FanStory platform does not help. I am not thanking you for your advice because it is not worthy of it. Do me a favor: Please stay away from my writing. By the way it is a prose and not a poem. Part I Chapter 18 of a Novel.
Comment from JSD
Check your title. 'Li'? And it's 'physique'. There are a few other typos as well. Otherwise, I love how you thoroughly successfully take the reader into the mind of your protagonist. Fascinating and engaging.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Check your title. 'Li'? And it's 'physique'. There are a few other typos as well. Otherwise, I love how you thoroughly successfully take the reader into the mind of your protagonist. Fascinating and engaging.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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JSD: I am not sure what happens with Typos. I double check in MS Word Spell Check and Error in Title is due to trunking last letters of Life because of space restrictions on uploading platform used by FS. I spent good bit of time reviewing the chapter. Please identify the typos if you can. Appreciate your comments. I have developed the skills of putting myself in the characters to think like real person would. My many thanks. This is the end of Part I of the 2 part novel. I have to work on the next phase of this novel. Hope I succeed in this venture. All the best.
Arun