Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was an incredible haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures showed the sunset in the glass and in the background. It also showed the flowers. I really liked it. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your excellent review. May you have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 21-Jul-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

I like the idea of floating in a cocktail glass.
I also love the picture. Beautiful!.
Another interesting piece to be added to your book of poetry
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Dr Ricky

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The artwork you chose for this poem is just as amazing as the poem itself. Thank you for sharing both of them with us. I enjoyed the complete package and I don't need to scream out. LOL

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

LoL that is right. :)

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

looks like iced tea...
cool flowers to match the drink perfectly
a great haiku package
wonderful imagery - i liked the "floating" part...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That sunset really seems to be in that cocktail. What gorgeous colors. Great presentation with the colors of the sunset, the drink, and the poppy at the end contrasting with the dark background.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Big sister.

Love
Marival

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes, too many cocktails can certainly put in that zone, I think I can speak for the many and say summer twilights are so romantic, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your summer haiku - nice picture presentation- looks delicious! Reminds of tequila Sunrise- OJ - grenadine syrup and tequila in layers in a tall glass / yumm! Good syllable count and flow - sun almost down - twilight- nice -good job AP

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Ap.

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Marival, so good to see you my sweet friend...

your poem reminds me of...those nights on the beach
you wished would never end...21 years in Florida
spoiled me...now I enjoy the beauty of the sun
shining off the snow...on a white snowy day...
big change...but both just as beautiful...

I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
very nicely written...love much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Linda. Love you too.

Gypsy hugs

reply by l.raven on 21-Jul-2023

you so welcome beautiful you...
love xxoo

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

You couldn't have found a better picture to accompany your poem. I love the imagery of the cocktail on the table with the light from the setting sun, reflecting through it. Very well written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Gretchen. You are very kind.

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