Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

So dark, so deep, so macabre. I could not steer my eyes away from your words. Intense, forlorn, sorrowful yet powerful. I love it.

A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness this sounds like domestic abuse, or war, a place where darkness resides, a chilling post for the contest leaving the reading with terror in his heart, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a sad but excellent read, you have/are describing the abused, whether physically or mentally, this must be a horrible situation to be in, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you. I am in a good place now.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful Freeform poem for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest you have presented it beautifully and the words, flow smoothly and read aloud. Have a good evening, and God bless.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

So dark, what happened, or you just wanted to have Allan Peo attitude:) "Reaching out into the shadows

Into an Uncaring Empty Void

Where only Darkness Reside". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you