Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and connection between lines - story appears to be about - state of mind - in the zone- allowing one's creativity to be expressed- good job AP

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A calm sea, just drifting and the sea; Sounds like the perfect setting to clear the mind and the poet's pen to be inspired.
I enjoyed the thought and your words.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

How peaceful this makes me feel, out on the ocean, one's heart and mind can overflow, it is so beautiful and serene out there, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am positive to a poet, such as yourself, boating on a calm open sea would bring about all sorts of ideas for beautiful poems. I can't imagine any different. Thank you for sharing this package with us.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from rama devi

Excellent

I love the AHA here with the metaphor made more complex and enhanced by the juxtaposition with contrast between calm sea and heart overflowing. Nice work! Excellent delivery, and that dash delivers perfect pregnant pause effect.

Bravo!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Rama Debi

Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.

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reply by rama devi on 17-Jul-2023

xxoo

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool sailing haiku... hopefully you won't get seasick as you drift lol

i like the heart overflowing on the calm sea... nice imagery

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's a great way to let one's heart overflow while writing. I like the water imagery both the physical drifting on a calm sea but also the mental drifting in the heart/soul/mind.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much big sister. Yes you got it.

Love

Marival

reply by lyenochka on 16-Jul-2023

Your poem must have affected me because as I was falling asleep last night I was drifting on some water...💖😊

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Pouring your heart out in words here as you describe the slow drift over calm waters, a fine post and I enjoyed the gentle ride upon the sea here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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