2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Haiku poem - good picture presentation- good syllable count and connection between lines - bee's holding the weight of the world in a true sense- no pollution detrimental to human existence- good job-AP
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I like your Haiku poem - good picture presentation- good syllable count and connection between lines - bee's holding the weight of the world in a true sense- no pollution detrimental to human existence- good job-AP
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.
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Comment from kahpot
Very well said, yes, bees to carry a lot of weight, supplying pollen all over the countries, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Very well said, yes, bees to carry a lot of weight, supplying pollen all over the countries, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from w.j.debi
They do hold the weight of the world on those latte wings, don't they? Those little bees are so essential to our existence. Wonderful presentation and timely message.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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They do hold the weight of the world on those latte wings, don't they? Those little bees are so essential to our existence. Wonderful presentation and timely message.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Those little guys sure do. They are so needed for pollination for so many things. Our crops depend on them. Thank you for sharing this tribute to the bees with us. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Those little guys sure do. They are so needed for pollination for so many things. Our crops depend on them. Thank you for sharing this tribute to the bees with us. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----sadly, bees seem to be disappearing everywhare----are man-made pollutants to blame? Climate change? No matter the reason, scary
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----sadly, bees seem to be disappearing everywhare----are man-made pollutants to blame? Climate change? No matter the reason, scary
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
i love watching bees - it's so interesting...
great buzzzzzzy haiku!
love that second picture!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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i love watching bees - it's so interesting...
great buzzzzzzy haiku!
love that second picture!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy A nice Haiku and makes one think about the bees
One question
Should your first 'bees be a single 'bee' as your third line says 'its' therefore singular and maybe should be 'their wings'
Hope that makes sense
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Hi Gypsy A nice Haiku and makes one think about the bees
One question
Should your first 'bees be a single 'bee' as your third line says 'its' therefore singular and maybe should be 'their wings'
Hope that makes sense
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you for catching that mistake.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I love the double meaning of the "weight of the world". On one hand the little bees are a wonder of physics that it can fly at all with its tiny wings and huge body. But because of its work of pollination, humans are able to survive because their work provides food!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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I love the double meaning of the "weight of the world". On one hand the little bees are a wonder of physics that it can fly at all with its tiny wings and huge body. But because of its work of pollination, humans are able to survive because their work provides food!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. I hope you had a good weekend. Mine was exhausting but I got to spend time with my son and his wife. That was nice.
Love
Marival
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are so right about these hard working bees. We must protect them at all costs. Now every time, I see a bee, I try to just be friendly, trying not to be afraid. I'll never try to kill them like before.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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You are so right about these hard working bees. We must protect them at all costs. Now every time, I see a bee, I try to just be friendly, trying not to be afraid. I'll never try to kill them like before.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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