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The Saga of Procrastination

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Comment from Sanku
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Shopaholics! shopaholics! They have no control over themselves and it is another addiction ! The dialogue only was a humorous way of depicting how their mind work. But actually it is a disease that needs treating..

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Another conversation I have with myself Iza as I always come back from the shops with more than I intended to buy! you made me smile here.

Just one edit here for you:

don't answe(r) that!

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

Comment from BethShelby
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How anoying to have that other part of you trying to spoil all you fun and making you feel bad about yourself. I guess that part isn't able to control your money so it has no choice but to make you fell bad. LOL

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing. I couldn't help but smile as I read. I think we are all guilty of this at some level.

"Why did you had to go there?" (you have to go)

And I didn't pots at home." (didn't have pots)

Never mind , don't answe that!
(mind, don't answer)

"I was there, remember? ('I' isn't in green)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

Comment from patcelaw
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This is such a profound story that you have written about procrastinating when it comes to spending money that you don't have. Sorrowfully, most people today are in real trouble with credit card debt because they just do not know how to quit spending. I use my credit card, but I only use it enough to make it through the month and then I pay it off at the end of the month. Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

Comment from JT traveller
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The lure of shopping and spending is a never ending cycle. Good dialogue which brings the characters to life. I like the different colours used for each character. Perceptive. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much for your kind review.