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A collection of episods of a Homeless Woman.

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I wonder what's cooking? Was this marriage a subtle maneuver to get her money and destroy the friendship she had with Candy? I guess then ext chapter would tell.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Iza: Hi.
    You have to read previous chapters to understand the events described in this chapter. Candy and the narrator are in a love based relation. However, Candy being a police woman, is continuously subjected to the sexual harassment at work and because she appeared to be engaged in a lesbian relationship with a trans person not reached the adult age of 17, one of the coworker, a police man, trays to get her in trouble with the law. This plot is developed to create a situation that would prove Candy is not sexually involved but is in a mentoring relationship. It will be help if you begin with chapter 1. Thanks for your interest and encouraging rating. I appreciate it. All the best.
    Arun
Comment from Victoria Schimbatori
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Your work captivated me from start to finish! The depth of your words and the emotions they evoke are truly remarkable. I encourage you to keep writing and sharing your incredible talent with the world. Your voice deserves to be heard, and I eagerly await more of your beautiful creations.









 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Victoria: Hello.
    I immensely appreciate your wonderful comments. I have been writing for a long time. Published 2 novels and a non fiction book with a Physician. My writing is influenced by British, French and Russian writers. I have failed in marketing my work and all my novels and poetry work is sitting on FanStory. No resources to bring them in the market. How do I publish the work and market it? Need help but don't know how to get that also. Please read this and other novels posted in my portfolio. Again, I wish to thank you and if you know how I can accomplish this task of publishing let me know. All the best.
    Arun