Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. Emma sure is nieve, but that is how you created her. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you for the kind review. More about Emma being innocent will come out next week.

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

I love the way Ace looks after Molly and herds her around. Another occasion when Seth comes to Emma's rescue. In a way, I can understand Seth's remark to Emma about If you want to see my naked body just say so. She has been pushing the sunscreen rather heavily. Maybe he got to close to her feelings, but it caused her to be upset and blow his reaction out of proportion. The wealthy and influential will always stick up for their son who's drunk and makes unwanted advances on a young woman who's just doing her job. Sounds familiar. I hope Seth won't have any more difficulty about arresting the precious son. Hope Seth and Emma can enjoy their cheeseburgers without incident. Great chapter. A lot going on. judi

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

I can promise more problem while out for burgers and with Marc. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I enjoyed this chapter very much. The action was very realistic, and the explanations of motivations clarified a lot about Emma and Seth's characters. kay

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Good one Barb. I suspected the cat would get down on its own. The old boy let his mouth overload his thoughts and was rebuked in a nice way. Getting interesting. / Ben.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you for sharing this kind review with us. Yes, Seth messed up. LOL

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellent dialogue again. I find your writing absolutely engaging and I do not think you need to worry at all. Thank you for continuing to share this tale with us.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

so, Emma is going to get her first motorcycle ride!

i am glad that Seth took the trouble to explain how his day went and Emma also is very understanding .But that seth said that on a teasing note .I didnt expect Emma to react this way..

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

He really wasn't teasing. At that time, he was serious. More will come out in the next post. Thank you for the kind review.