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The Aspen Grove Murders

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A Tommy Thompson Mystery

25 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Interesting heart facts in your notes; thank you for that explanation. That's quite a list of charges against Gaston Paulette, and I'm sure Tommy is glad they have been delivered. It's good Hank has survived the bullet wound. Another great chapter with good dialogue. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Carol dear, thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating! I'm so honored and blessed. My very best to you and yours as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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"kissed him like he'd just returned from war." Well, he kind of has - a war with his body.

As always, very good dialogue. It is always realistic, moves the story along, and serves a purpose in revealing the plot.

Another bad guy under arrest - perhaps the most important bad guy to Tommy.

xoxo
Pam

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Dear Pam,
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating! I'm so honored and blessed. My very best to you and yours as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Not only well-versed in story telling it seems
By your notes you are
Medically schooled as well. Was that your career choice? Well done. I know readers who follow along have to be pleased.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Tom, Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both mean so much. Blessings to you always.
    Sal :))
Comment from lyenochka
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A miraculous healing and a case solved all in one post! So glad for the angelic encounter and the love shared between the three couples. And now Tommy's daughter's killer will face justice.
Great job, Sally!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Helen dear. It means the world to me. How you have the time for this, I cannot imagine. Thank you, I am blessed once again! Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The good guy survives and so does the bad one, but the bad one may do his surviving in prison for the rest of his life. It's a good thing for Tommy that he gets to see his daughter's murderer imprisoned.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Carol dear, Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both mean so much. Blessings to you and yours.
    Sal :)) XOs
Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. I like the way you handled the appearance of the angel. I believe in angels. So it was very believable to me. I don't see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Thank you, Elizabeth. My blessings back to and yours.
    Sal :))
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Another exciting chapter, Sally. You start out with the angel, Patience who came to Hank and Betty in the hospital. I like the way you had the angel pray, which I thought a great touch.

Gaston arrested! Gotta love that part!! How long that arrest was in coming, then he wakes up asking for his wife, how absurd was that!! She's happily married now, buddy!

You still leave us with a cliff-hanger on what's going to happen to Paulette!

Lovely job, and well worth the one week wait, lol.

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Rhonda dear, thank you for the super review and generous six star rating! I'm so honored and blessed. My very best to you and yours as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This chapter is packed full of pace and development with Hank waking up from his coma and proposing to Betty Jo and then simultaneously the evil Paulette coming out of his coma without such a welcoming reception! I like the mystical intervention of Angel Patience which is very vividly described. The charges are put to Paulette by Thompson with subsequent understandable hostility from the latter. Your story reads flawlessly, Sally so I have nothing to suggest by way of correction. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Both mean the world to me. Blessings to you always.
    Sal XOs
Comment from royowen
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I like the way you blend the two realms of the physical and the spiritual Sally, I've read a. Few this morning, and it's great to venture outside the realm of the physical world in which we live, well done, my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
    Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Both mean the world to me. Blessings to you always.
    Sal :)) xo
reply by royowen on 28-Jun-2023
    Bless you
Comment from Ulla
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Well, Sally, so two things happened within the same building. One was called back from death and is now planning his wedding, and the other has just been arrested for an abduction and murder. Wonderful contrast. Hugs, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
    Thank you for the wonderful review and glorious stars, my friend! I'm so blessed. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs