Down the Halls
After my Dad's stroke, in the convalescent hospital3 total reviews
Comment from walk.write.reflect
The story gracefully unfolds, carrying an authentic essence with plenty of heart. Its vivid descriptions evoke emotions, from sorrow to love, capturing every moment in between. Thank you for sharing this emotional piece. Best wishes in the contest. Best Regards
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
The story gracefully unfolds, carrying an authentic essence with plenty of heart. Its vivid descriptions evoke emotions, from sorrow to love, capturing every moment in between. Thank you for sharing this emotional piece. Best wishes in the contest. Best Regards
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Blessings.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How very sad dementia is in old age and it turns us into monsters and need people who are desperate to be well and enjoy life. Alas we outlive our sell-by-date and the result is that we linger on when really we should have died a long time ago. This is a poignant write and I hope your Father is okay, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
How very sad dementia is in old age and it turns us into monsters and need people who are desperate to be well and enjoy life. Alas we outlive our sell-by-date and the result is that we linger on when really we should have died a long time ago. This is a poignant write and I hope your Father is okay, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from royowen
There are a lot of lonely people out there, mainly among the elderly, they feel discarded, and who's to say they're not. This is a sad, sad story, and I hope they find their place in eternity, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
There are a lot of lonely people out there, mainly among the elderly, they feel discarded, and who's to say they're not. This is a sad, sad story, and I hope they find their place in eternity, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to review and for your kind words.
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Most welcome