Reviews from

Down the Halls

After my Dad's stroke, in the convalescent hospital

3 total reviews 
Comment from walk.write.reflect
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The story gracefully unfolds, carrying an authentic essence with plenty of heart. Its vivid descriptions evoke emotions, from sorrow to love, capturing every moment in between. Thank you for sharing this emotional piece. Best wishes in the contest. Best Regards

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Blessings.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How very sad dementia is in old age and it turns us into monsters and need people who are desperate to be well and enjoy life. Alas we outlive our sell-by-date and the result is that we linger on when really we should have died a long time ago. This is a poignant write and I hope your Father is okay, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from royowen
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There are a lot of lonely people out there, mainly among the elderly, they feel discarded, and who's to say they're not. This is a sad, sad story, and I hope they find their place in eternity, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to review and for your kind words.
reply by royowen on 17-Jun-2023
    Most welcome