Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A great and easy read with good length, clear font and faultless prose and dialogue. Your characters are vividly drawn and what I enjoy about your writing that, although detailed, it doesn't get bogged down in too much imagery etc., therefore freeing up the story line. Thanks for sharing, Sally, and hopefully you're keeping well. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Debbie. It is so appreciated and needed. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

I really love it the you detail the characters in your book ...makes it so much easier to read...so many to keep track of especially as I am just coming into this now...and, missed all the 30 chapters before...oh well... I am pretty good at catching up.
This writing of yours looks like a great effort and I do think it is paying off...Really enjoyed the read.
Lisa, new to this site

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Dear Lisa, thank you so much for the lovely review and for stopping by to visit my book. It is so appreciated. How kind of you to catch up with me here.
Sending you my very best today as always,
Sally XOs

reply by Lisasview on 21-Jun-2023

You are so welcome...

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Things are coming together but we need to solve the mystery of who shot Hank and will he be all right. I am worried. This is a good write.

Simon extended his hand, "Are you sure we can't talk you into lunch, Detective?" (period after 'hand')

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Barbara. The helpful improvements are most appreciated too. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally. XOs

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. This was a quick read for me, and I am yearning for more. I cannot wait to see what happens with Frank and the trial. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Dear Elizabeth, thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. Both means so much to me. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally. Xo