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Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A wonderful symphony of wit, wisdom, and puns. I love the way the poem tells a series of rhyming witticisms which bring a smile to my face which grows wider with each joke until I can no longer contain my mirth and a laugh escapes.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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A wonderful symphony of wit, wisdom, and puns. I love the way the poem tells a series of rhyming witticisms which bring a smile to my face which grows wider with each joke until I can no longer contain my mirth and a laugh escapes.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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You are so gracious and kind my friend. I appreciated your sweet comments and in return you gave me the biggest smile. Thank you for all of that and your generous gift of six stars!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very clever, Debi. You can always come up with something humorous - even though you are struggling physically. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Very clever, Debi. You can always come up with something humorous - even though you are struggling physically. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Hi there Paul, I am now half way done with my surgeries and even tho I am using audio, I know it won't be long and I will be reading and writing on my own. Can't wait to start reading and reviewing you more dear friend. Thanks so much Paul!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Tell Kenzie the artwork is fantastic.
-A nice presentation and fun poem.
-I wonder if you had to try hard to
come up with the puns, or if they
just pop into your head.
-I like the use of your two selves and
the perspective of each, and the puns were priceless!!!
-It is fun, but is also very organized and well thought out.
-One of my favorites is "it is your own asphalt."
-My other favorite is "you just have your shelf to blame."
-A great job and a lot of fun, Debi. Good luck in the contest.
I wonder if your shoes are kept in boxes. If not,
this entry could be a shoe in!"
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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-Tell Kenzie the artwork is fantastic.
-A nice presentation and fun poem.
-I wonder if you had to try hard to
come up with the puns, or if they
just pop into your head.
-I like the use of your two selves and
the perspective of each, and the puns were priceless!!!
-It is fun, but is also very organized and well thought out.
-One of my favorites is "it is your own asphalt."
-My other favorite is "you just have your shelf to blame."
-A great job and a lot of fun, Debi. Good luck in the contest.
I wonder if your shoes are kept in boxes. If not,
this entry could be a shoe in!"
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Awe Pam, you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Debi. I hope your surgery went well, and things improve for you.
Comment from Lisasview
Looks like your daughter is an artist in the making... I say this because i am a professional water colourist. I think it is wonderful that you used her artwork for your lovely poem.
I really enjoyed it.
Lisa, new to this site
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Looks like your daughter is an artist in the making... I say this because i am a professional water colourist. I think it is wonderful that you used her artwork for your lovely poem.
I really enjoyed it.
Lisa, new to this site
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Oh Lisa, thank you and welcome to FS. I hope you love it here like most of us do. I hope we will be good friends! If you ever need anything, I would be happy to help you.
Thanks for your kind words and for what you said for my granddaughter, Kenzie. She is a tattoo artist and does much art for local businesses in our area and gives me full access to her work. I use her a lot. If you look in my portfolio you will see some of her other work. But anyway, I would love to see yours as well. Thanks again for your awesome review and comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
It was a real fun dialogue with "I, Me and Myself"(lol). Terrific imagery and humor. I smiled at each episode.
It lifted my spirits, loved the bubbling energy emanating from it
Thanks for sharing this delightful writing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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It was a real fun dialogue with "I, Me and Myself"(lol). Terrific imagery and humor. I smiled at each episode.
It lifted my spirits, loved the bubbling energy emanating from it
Thanks for sharing this delightful writing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Awe, thank you EM and as always you are so kind. You gave me the biggest smile in return with the loveliest comments. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. You are so kind my dear friend!
Comment from GinaC
I absolutely loved the play on words! It was light, clever, and witty and you very colorfully portrayed the inner-dialogue that goes on between our two ears so much of the time. I loved this!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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I absolutely loved the play on words! It was light, clever, and witty and you very colorfully portrayed the inner-dialogue that goes on between our two ears so much of the time. I loved this!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Awe Gina, you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
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Awe Gina, you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
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Awe Gina, you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
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Lol, sorry I kept pushing save when I thought it wasn't going through. I guess it did go through. Haha!
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Technology is the best huh lol Thank you for responding!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very cleverly done Debi with great humour and originality. Your verse is a joy to read, flows smoothly with sound rhyming pattern. A great contender for this contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Very cleverly done Debi with great humour and originality. Your verse is a joy to read, flows smoothly with sound rhyming pattern. A great contender for this contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thanks, Debbie. You have made me smile and I appreciated that. On my way right now to the hospital for my surgery. So excited. Thanks for you kind words.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love it, Debi. I am glad you entered this contest and shared this delightful conversation with us. I am sure that a lot of us can relate. I like how your two voices tied in together, especially the one about the books falling.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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I love it, Debi. I am glad you entered this contest and shared this delightful conversation with us. I am sure that a lot of us can relate. I like how your two voices tied in together, especially the one about the books falling.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Awe Anne, you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Oh my goodness sis, and to think, when you came up with this, you were facing multiple eye surgeries and a multitude of physical challenges besides.
(I feel compelled to tell you something. In all seriousness, you need to listen to me!)
In eternity past, millions of years before the earth was created, God envisioned a special ministry . One that would take an absolutely incredible person to fulfill all of the intricacies he had planned for this assignment. AND . . .
GOD CHOSE YOU.
God surveyed every human being, who would ever be born and His eyes came to rest on one person.
GOD CHOSE YOU.
You see God is omniscient! This means He knows everything. God knew there was going to be a rebellion in heaven. He knew he was going to create the human race. He knew that they were going to have an adversary by the name of Satan. He knew that one of Satan's great tactics to destroy humans and their relationship with Him was something called the problem of pain. ("Why? Oh, why, would a GOOD God let people suffer?")
GOD CHOSE YOU.
God knew that not only was Satan going to rebel against God, he knew the human race was going to rebel as well. He knew that Satan would plant a concept inside each of us that would be contrary to God. He knew the inner conflicts we would have to fight against.
1. " I know what needs to happen."
2. " I know how to "getter done."
3. " god is omnipotent.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Oh my goodness sis, and to think, when you came up with this, you were facing multiple eye surgeries and a multitude of physical challenges besides.
(I feel compelled to tell you something. In all seriousness, you need to listen to me!)
In eternity past, millions of years before the earth was created, God envisioned a special ministry . One that would take an absolutely incredible person to fulfill all of the intricacies he had planned for this assignment. AND . . .
GOD CHOSE YOU.
God surveyed every human being, who would ever be born and His eyes came to rest on one person.
GOD CHOSE YOU.
You see God is omniscient! This means He knows everything. God knew there was going to be a rebellion in heaven. He knew he was going to create the human race. He knew that they were going to have an adversary by the name of Satan. He knew that one of Satan's great tactics to destroy humans and their relationship with Him was something called the problem of pain. ("Why? Oh, why, would a GOOD God let people suffer?")
GOD CHOSE YOU.
God knew that not only was Satan going to rebel against God, he knew the human race was going to rebel as well. He knew that Satan would plant a concept inside each of us that would be contrary to God. He knew the inner conflicts we would have to fight against.
1. " I know what needs to happen."
2. " I know how to "getter done."
3. " god is omnipotent.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Once again I thank you for the kind and caring comments and six stars! You are one of A kind!
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You?re welcome sis, I have been praying for your speedy full recovery. From the crown of your head to the soles of your feet.
Comment from Janel Mock
The way you can rhyme like its nothing! I am amazed! I love your asphalt joke... That was my favorite part! Thank you so much for sharing! Well deserved 6 stars! ~Janel
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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The way you can rhyme like its nothing! I am amazed! I love your asphalt joke... That was my favorite part! Thank you so much for sharing! Well deserved 6 stars! ~Janel
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Awe Janel , you are an Angel. Like I wrote in my poem, some were borrowed jokes, but a few I actually did make up. I love to keep it light. Especially since I was looking at my surgery yesterday. So I am doing this all by audio. So happy that I wrote some of my posts ahead too. Thanks dear friend for your kind words and your awesome six stars. It means so much to me.
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You?re very welcome!!!
