Guided by Faith
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Comment from Jim Wile
Now it's Emma shaking her head. These two are getting so close to a kiss, or at least an embrace; they both seem to want it.
I'm glad you've brought Peggy back into this. We need a good villain trying to interfere with them. I'm looking forward to seeing how she is dealt with and what she has in mind. Nicely written, Barbara. Jim
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Now it's Emma shaking her head. These two are getting so close to a kiss, or at least an embrace; they both seem to want it.
I'm glad you've brought Peggy back into this. We need a good villain trying to interfere with them. I'm looking forward to seeing how she is dealt with and what she has in mind. Nicely written, Barbara. Jim
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for this kind review. I appreciate it. We will see more of Peggy.
Comment from judiverse
I think Keith may be trying to do a little matchmaking. Emma could easily have given Seth the information about the number of children she's expecting for her class over the phone. Peggy is certainly a fly in the ointment. Seth has never given her any indication that he's interested in her. She's rude to Emma, seeing her as a rival. I suspect she'll cause more trouble down the road. You might give a description of Peggy here. If she's dressed up or made up to indicate she's trying to get Seth's attention. Seth went to interview a person who might be the stalker, but with not much success. At least he's trying to find out who his person is. Stalking someone could lead to more serious actions. judi
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I think Keith may be trying to do a little matchmaking. Emma could easily have given Seth the information about the number of children she's expecting for her class over the phone. Peggy is certainly a fly in the ointment. Seth has never given her any indication that he's interested in her. She's rude to Emma, seeing her as a rival. I suspect she'll cause more trouble down the road. You might give a description of Peggy here. If she's dressed up or made up to indicate she's trying to get Seth's attention. Seth went to interview a person who might be the stalker, but with not much success. At least he's trying to find out who his person is. Stalking someone could lead to more serious actions. judi
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Keith might be doing some match making too.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Seth is definitely warming to Emma, and he's even thinking now that he would have loved a hug, and I know Emma would have loved to hug him! That Peggy is a pain in the... isn't she? It's time for Seth to put her straight. I absolutely adore Ace! He is such a gorgeous, well behaved dog. I want him! Well done, my friend, another lovely chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Seth is definitely warming to Emma, and he's even thinking now that he would have loved a hug, and I know Emma would have loved to hug him! That Peggy is a pain in the... isn't she? It's time for Seth to put her straight. I absolutely adore Ace! He is such a gorgeous, well behaved dog. I want him! Well done, my friend, another lovely chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I want Ace myself. My mom owns a GSD. His name is Charlie and he's absolutely wonderful. He's perfect. Ace is patterned after him. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
We now see this character - Peggy (Emma's acquaintance from school) -making a catty remark as obviously after Seth herself. But this has rather stepped up a gear and we can see that Emma is very much on the defensive and unhappy about things. This and the 'almost hug' should drive this couple even further together. We all want this now but somehow I think this isn't the last of Peggy's mischief. Your story is told with its usual flair, engaging the reader from the start. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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We now see this character - Peggy (Emma's acquaintance from school) -making a catty remark as obviously after Seth herself. But this has rather stepped up a gear and we can see that Emma is very much on the defensive and unhappy about things. This and the 'almost hug' should drive this couple even further together. We all want this now but somehow I think this isn't the last of Peggy's mischief. Your story is told with its usual flair, engaging the reader from the start. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I can promise we will see Peggy again. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Peggy Barton is heading fur a heartbreak. When will people learn that you cannot win at the game of love by trying to chase away your competition. Especially if that competition does not even need to compete with you. She will learn, no doubt the hard way, through heartbreak.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Peggy Barton is heading fur a heartbreak. When will people learn that you cannot win at the game of love by trying to chase away your competition. Especially if that competition does not even need to compete with you. She will learn, no doubt the hard way, through heartbreak.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Yes, she will learn the hard way. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from Paul McFarland
Good job, Barb. I can see Peggy Barton getting in this story a bit more in the near future. That "almost" hug was interesting. Maybe next time.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Good job, Barb. I can see Peggy Barton getting in this story a bit more in the near future. That "almost" hug was interesting. Maybe next time.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Yes, Peggy will be in the story more often. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Somebody is Julious. Or it seems that way. Closing this up more tightly toward romance. I like the way you mingle both together. A touch of jealousy keeps an idea in the background.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Somebody is Julious. Or it seems that way. Closing this up more tightly toward romance. I like the way you mingle both together. A touch of jealousy keeps an idea in the background.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for sharing this kind review.
Comment from Ulla
So here goes the new, chapter, Barbara. It's well written as per usual. So Peggy is Emma's adversary. Or maybe not. We'll see soon enough. I like the story and I'm looking forward to reading on. All bst, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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So here goes the new, chapter, Barbara. It's well written as per usual. So Peggy is Emma's adversary. Or maybe not. We'll see soon enough. I like the story and I'm looking forward to reading on. All bst, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Peggy will be a pain in the butt. I can't wait to see what happens to her.
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter. I would suggest dialing back on Peggy. Having her be a one-dimensional negative character or the opposite of your main female protagonist may be too much. Not a complaint, just an observation that your stories usually contain one female rival for the male lead, and they are usually the same type of woman. Wouldn't it be more interesting if the rival was also a good woman, just in a different way? Just saying.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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A well written chapter. I would suggest dialing back on Peggy. Having her be a one-dimensional negative character or the opposite of your main female protagonist may be too much. Not a complaint, just an observation that your stories usually contain one female rival for the male lead, and they are usually the same type of woman. Wouldn't it be more interesting if the rival was also a good woman, just in a different way? Just saying.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I'll take that into consideration. We will see a lot more of Peggy. Thank you for the kind review.
