Sweet Summer Memories
Summer was always SO much fun.4 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional! I truly enjoyed your Summer Memories poem. The rhyming flowed smoothly and it was descriptive. Other than 4 wheeling, I did similar things as a kid, we went to the beach and played board games and played outside. I'm voting now. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Exceptional! I truly enjoyed your Summer Memories poem. The rhyming flowed smoothly and it was descriptive. Other than 4 wheeling, I did similar things as a kid, we went to the beach and played board games and played outside. I'm voting now. Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your reviewing and your support.
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Of course! You're welcome! ')) Alex
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I mean, wow. Living in the moment, even if the moment was long ago.
I felt more than read the events back when, I too was the age when puppy love began to growl, and there were far more than twenty-four hours in a day.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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I mean, wow. Living in the moment, even if the moment was long ago.
I felt more than read the events back when, I too was the age when puppy love began to growl, and there were far more than twenty-four hours in a day.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thank you! I am glad that my writing was able to move you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine memories and I also remember enjoying the summer months as a kid and your words here are endearing as you recall riding your bike when you were young, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Fine memories and I also remember enjoying the summer months as a kid and your words here are endearing as you recall riding your bike when you were young, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I actually enjoyed writing it and recalling those old memories.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a fun verse with light tone and joyful sentiments. However, I did feel meter was forfeited for sometimes rather forced rhyme. Always try reading out loud and getting a beat. If it jars a bit, try condensing lines and getting a more regular syllable count. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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This is a fun verse with light tone and joyful sentiments. However, I did feel meter was forfeited for sometimes rather forced rhyme. Always try reading out loud and getting a beat. If it jars a bit, try condensing lines and getting a more regular syllable count. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you for reviewing and for the advice. I will take a closer look from now on and I will definitely follow your suggestion of reading aloud to test in the future.
