Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Lovers moon special for couples.
June is a busy month as weddings are held in this month
it's a month for lovers red roses ad proposals.
great presentation.
Good job.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya

reply by country ranch writer on 16-Jun-2023

Snikes

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's a lovely opening stanza for your 3-6-9 entry. You need two more stanzas for the contest. Yes, the strawberry moon is well known in the northern hemisphere and June is a romantic time of year as your poem describes. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023

Lyenochka thanks for that! The vital details we miss when we sit down to create at midnight's witching hour!! zanya

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

I like the word choice of 'sizzling embrace' when referring to 'summer love'. It's a great poem, but I believe for the contest you need 3 stanzas with each one following the 3-6-9 syllable count. So, you'll need 2 more stanzas.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thanks for reading and sharing - yes and the reminder is welcome. zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Only these lovers will know the feelings they are experiencing and their encouragement for the love to grow is magical here Zanya, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Great review zanya