Rebounding From Heartbreak
Love can be like the latex from a rubber tree.10 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Very clever. Mother Nature provides for us, it is unfortunate we don't show the same respect. Climate Change is her fighting back, only if we start showing respect, hopefully she will calm down.
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Very clever. Mother Nature provides for us, it is unfortunate we don't show the same respect. Climate Change is her fighting back, only if we start showing respect, hopefully she will calm down.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
You have made a wise observation :this is a very clever comparison, and I like the synchronicity between the concepts of rubber and bouncing. All the best in the contest.
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You have made a wise observation :this is a very clever comparison, and I like the synchronicity between the concepts of rubber and bouncing. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I like your post very much because maybe I can relate to it and think it's so true. When it happens you think the whole world is crumbling, but then you find that life goes on well... Great post!!
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I like your post very much because maybe I can relate to it and think it's so true. When it happens you think the whole world is crumbling, but then you find that life goes on well... Great post!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very positive attitude and the prompt of the rubber tree suits it very well. Very original and creative. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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That is a very positive attitude and the prompt of the rubber tree suits it very well. Very original and creative. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent and imaginative image for recovery and life's characteristic yearning to sustain life and balance. The visual and your words evocatively combine. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
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An excellent and imaginative image for recovery and life's characteristic yearning to sustain life and balance. The visual and your words evocatively combine. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
Comment from Eleri
I like your idea of relating love and its effects to rubber - a great image. The poem has the correct number of syllables per line for this contest and does read well too. I wish you well in the competition
Eleri
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I like your idea of relating love and its effects to rubber - a great image. The poem has the correct number of syllables per line for this contest and does read well too. I wish you well in the competition
Eleri
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
Comment from Regina Elliott
A beauteous and hopeful
5-7-5. It speaks of love's
survival. May you have
success in the contest, as
this entry is a strong contender. Many blessings
to you. ~
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A beauteous and hopeful
5-7-5. It speaks of love's
survival. May you have
success in the contest, as
this entry is a strong contender. Many blessings
to you. ~
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Good poem and a fine example of the 575 poetry style! You have successfully managed to create an impact to result short a space and syllable count!
A fine selection for a picture that completely and appropriate matches your poem. A small suggestion of raising the fart unfolding it a little bit so that the older folks may be able to read and enjoy your palm as well. This does not take away from the beauty of this poem nor of its word selection or your presentation. It's all quite lovely I think it's a great submission. I wish you all the best hope you have a fun evening!
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Good poem and a fine example of the 575 poetry style! You have successfully managed to create an impact to result short a space and syllable count!
A fine selection for a picture that completely and appropriate matches your poem. A small suggestion of raising the fart unfolding it a little bit so that the older folks may be able to read and enjoy your palm as well. This does not take away from the beauty of this poem nor of its word selection or your presentation. It's all quite lovely I think it's a great submission. I wish you all the best hope you have a fun evening!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant 5-7-5 as we battle against heartache and hurt and attack and tomorrow brings a welcome change as we recover and fight back, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A poignant 5-7-5 as we battle against heartache and hurt and attack and tomorrow brings a welcome change as we recover and fight back, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
