Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Faith Chapter 10 B"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Wow. That's all I can think to say. Don't think you want a review filled with just wow written over and over so here goes. This was incredibly intense. It could have gone either way. But seeing as how she's the female lead in the romance, I figures she would end up safe. I loved the fact that he was there with her without physically being there. That was a unique way of bringing a new intimacy to their budding relationship. I liked how you described Ace's reaction. Trained dog, yes, but he knows Emma as well. Maybe it was personal for him as well. Great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Wow. That's all I can think to say. Don't think you want a review filled with just wow written over and over so here goes. This was incredibly intense. It could have gone either way. But seeing as how she's the female lead in the romance, I figures she would end up safe. I loved the fact that he was there with her without physically being there. That was a unique way of bringing a new intimacy to their budding relationship. I liked how you described Ace's reaction. Trained dog, yes, but he knows Emma as well. Maybe it was personal for him as well. Great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Yes, I think Ace has a thing for Emma. LOL Thank you for the encouragement. I was a little worried how this would go over.
Comment from Ben Colder
Who in the right mine would wish to rob a coffee shop knowing not much they could get. No doubt drugs were in volved. But it brought a love affair to get onward. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Who in the right mine would wish to rob a coffee shop knowing not much they could get. No doubt drugs were in volved. But it brought a love affair to get onward. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Like Carl said, they were amateurs.
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For sure.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have brought in some action in this chapter. That was a good idea. This should result in the relationship between Seth and Emma. You're probably going to do something to screw up this relationship. Hopefully there will be a happy ending.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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You have brought in some action in this chapter. That was a good idea. This should result in the relationship between Seth and Emma. You're probably going to do something to screw up this relationship. Hopefully there will be a happy ending.
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Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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I can promise eventually a happy ending, but things will get rocky at times. Thank you for the kind review.
