Comment from Monica Chaddick

Good

I like the poem, but I feel that the coloring makes it a bit difficult to read. Also, and this is just my personal opinion, I prefer pictures with the poems and stories. Good luck!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is an interesting 1-6-1 which leaves me pondering a bit. Do you mean 'those younger' when you refer to 'people backstage' ? I'm sorry if I'm missing the point which I'm sure is well made because your rhyming and flow are very sound in this difficult brief. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you for your review. What I was thinking about is the difference between the public face and what is going on in someone's head. The public face is the stage and in someone's head is backstage.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Are these grumpy old men and women with an axe to grind? I think we are sometimes less tolerant in old age as our inpatient rage rears its ugly head, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you for your review. What I was thinking about is the difference between the public face and what is going on in someone's head. The public face is the stage and in someone's head is backstage.