Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

This is a very good poem. Good syllable count, nice flow. I do own a gun, and I have unfortunately had to aim it at a crazy person once, but thankfully I haven't had to use it. It is sad that sometimes we need this sort of protection. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

thanks glad you liked it

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

Your poem is powerful in the message it sends. It is unfortunate your poem even needed to be expressed or composed. You did a good job communicating a feeling through this poem.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

thanks glad you liked it

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This invention alone has resulted in many innocent people being killed and I curse the day we discovered how to more efficiency kill. A poignant write, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks as usual

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Dear Poet, this short but carries a big message poem
is so very needed these days.
Gun violence has become so
common that it could be
desensitizing to some people.
I pray for peace. Well penned
Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

thanks as usual