Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I like your poem. It is thought provoking. They rhymes work well together. The poem flows nicely. You communicated a lot through the eight syllables. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

I truly believe Christ just wants us to listen to what He says and then just reach out to others as He did. It's very simple...sometimes it can be summed up in eight syllables. I really appreciate your review. Blessings to you.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very wonderful 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you for your complimentary review and best wishes.

reply by Teri7 on 27-May-2023

You are so welcome!!! You got my vote! Blessings, Teri

reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you.

reply by Teri7 on 27-May-2023

😊💕❤️

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Dear Poet, a short but carries
the love and teachings of
Christ in a powerful way.
My very best wishes for the
contest. Have a blessed
holiday weekend. :))))))

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you for your review and best wishes. Blessings to you as well on this Memorial Day.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

good 1-6-1 rhyming poem
strong personal message
smooth flow and rhyme
and the picture was perfect

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :0

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you for your review. Your comments are much appreciated.