Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think you have mistakenly repeated your poem a few times here? The pandemic caused such chaos that I think people with never forget that period of history in their lives. Funerals could not be attended, weddings were cancelled and no one was able to go to church. A poignant write and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I see that this is your first post to fan story. I wish you the very best with all of your writing, and I hope that we as writers will be able to help you if you have situations where you need some help. Have a good day, and God bless.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i loved staying home!! and social distancing! LOL

this was a wonderfully written poem about your faith and how it never wavers no matter what

i found it a little long - but that could be just me

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your FreeVerse and applaud you on posting your first poem here on FanStory. Welcome and I hope you enjoy the site as much as I do. I would mention that your verse repeats itself over and over. I don't know if that is intentional or not... just thought I would mention it. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a little long for a poem. It looks a little more like an essay. But being a fellow believer I get the gist of the work. Sometimes God leaves us "out on a limb" to prove our faith, but waiting is something we humans don't like doing something that we don't like. These scriptures may help. (Isaiah 40:30, But those that wait upon the Lord...Matthew 11:28-30 ) welcome to fanstory, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-May-2023