Soaring high
Who needs wings? Reach for your dreams!18 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is a lovely poem. The picture is sweet. I really have to work to read you because I try to read things that need points, not those that already have plenty.
As I am fairly new here, Almost everything needs points, not many have 26 and beyond.hahaha
Karen
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
This is a lovely poem. The picture is sweet. I really have to work to read you because I try to read things that need points, not those that already have plenty.
As I am fairly new here, Almost everything needs points, not many have 26 and beyond.hahaha
Karen
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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You're so sweet Karen! I wasn't very au fait in the beginning was I and used to get very frustrated with it all? Wishing I hadn't bothered. I'll have a look at yours tomorrow if you like... But I know you're quite prolific so it might take a while:))
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You write well and have lots of friends who read your stuff. and you have been here a while. I have been writing here less than 3 months. i have been reviewing and writing my little heart out. While I am on here I get to ignore my back.
That is worth a lot to me. Love ya kiddo Karen
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You write well and have lots of friends who read your stuff. and you have been here a while. I have been writing here less than 3 months. i have been reviewing and writing my little heart out. While I am on here I get to ignore my back.
That is worth a lot to me. Love ya kiddo Karen
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Dear Karen, I've only been here since March but, as soon as I learned the ropes about promoting high, it helped. I've been doing that with virtual dollars from reviewing and I think this contact and a certain genre of posts got me known. I've never collected a huge number of fans because I think it's sometimes wrong to be too committed to them and for them to feel too committed to me. I think that it's important to have a characteristic style and you have that already. But story-writing is harder to get recognised simply because it's a lot more time-consuming for the reviewer.
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Well, I don't have many fans compared to most people here.
I fan people whose stuff I like to read anyway. Like you. Karen
Comment from Janel Mock
This is such a fun poem! The image goes perfect with it as well! I love the different forms of how poems can be made. It makes it extra special and fun! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
This is such a fun poem! The image goes perfect with it as well! I love the different forms of how poems can be made. It makes it extra special and fun! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Jane for your rating and feedback. Much appreciated. Take care Debbie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Debbie.
-A very nice dedication to Debra White.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good message about being all you can be.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
-Nice image and presentation, Debbie.
-A very nice dedication to Debra White.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good message about being all you can be.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Pam! Your comments, as ever, greatly valued! Got beaten out of the sky for this one :( Take care Debbie
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You are very welcome, Debbie, and you take care, too.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very encouraging and uplifting (yes, pun definitely intended) poem that can't help but make the reader smile. My only suggestion is to put a comma after wings. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
This is a very encouraging and uplifting (yes, pun definitely intended) poem that can't help but make the reader smile. My only suggestion is to put a comma after wings. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Michele for your kind rating and feedback! Take care Debbie
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You're very welcome, Debbie. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from shelley kaye
cute little rhyme and balloon picture
nice colour scheme, too
looks like flying in the sky
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
cute little rhyme and balloon picture
nice colour scheme, too
looks like flying in the sky
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Yes, I wondered how they got that shot but they can do anything these days! Thanks so much for your kind rating and feedback. As ever, much appreciated. Take care Debbie
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Soaring High, has the proper formatting and reminds us to never forget how good it can feel to soar above where we are and be free of the ground for a while.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
This 1-6-1, Soaring High, has the proper formatting and reminds us to never forget how good it can feel to soar above where we are and be free of the ground for a while.
Comment Written 30-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you Bill! All your words are valued. Take care Debbie
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a great entry for the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your chosen end rhymes - fly / sky / high work well together and allows for a free and fun feel. A nice and light entry for the competition that should do well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
This is a great entry for the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your chosen end rhymes - fly / sky / high work well together and allows for a free and fun feel. A nice and light entry for the competition that should do well. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. Much appreciated. But I was outclassed in the contest:( Take care Debbie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this! Much appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
Well done in meeting the contest requirements for syllables and rhyme, and for a very well-chosen picture to accompany your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
Well done in meeting the contest requirements for syllables and rhyme, and for a very well-chosen picture to accompany your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this! Much appreciated.
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Wonderfully uplifting entry to the 1-6-1 poetry contest. Cute artwork, correct syllable count and rhyming leave me finding nothing to correct. You did a good job!
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
Wonderfully uplifting entry to the 1-6-1 poetry contest. Cute artwork, correct syllable count and rhyming leave me finding nothing to correct. You did a good job!
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Much appreciated.