Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt Contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks, Gypsy

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The first two lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all! A
slash on the finger that hurts! A perfect 1-6-1 poem. The artwork
is awesome and I remember getting cuts like this when I was younger!
Hi Dolly, hope all is well for you.....Maria

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks, Maria

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

Your poem brought a smile to my face. I like how you arranged the poem. The subject matter is good for a short poem like this. A very whimsical poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you, Andrea

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem made me laugh. Something hard to do before coffee. Your poem set my day off on a positive note, for that I thank you. The picture compliments your fine words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you, Jade

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Interesting poem. In 8 syllables how many things can we say? You said enough for the reader to abruptly feel the sharp pain!!
Well done!
Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks, Mario

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile here as a little cut like this can be very painful but fortunately they heal overnight! An inventive post for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a great verse that answers the prompt perfectly. I did have a bit of trouble rhyming ooooh, with boo boo. I usually write it differently, but I am sure everyone will understand. I wish you luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks, Melissa

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Oh my looks like a real boo-boo on that finger..also looks like a good entry for the contest, with perfect syllable count...good luck
in the contest.
warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you, Victoria.

reply by mrsmajor on 26-May-2023

My Pleasure!

reply by mrsmajor on 26-May-2023

My Pleasure!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

One gets the idea that the Speaker is a young mother talking to her child. I have always loved "boo boo" as a synonym for a small cut. I recall having several boxes of band-aids handy when my kids were young. Rod

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Boo boo never gets old.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Heh heh. Yes those darn cuts on the finger, get some orange juice on them and they sting. A great 1/6/1 poetry entry in this contest, good, but inspired rhyming, good job, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you, Roy.

reply by royowen on 26-May-2023

Pleasure