Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your picture plus your words made a great
contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed
reading this. Your rhymes worked well and
the syllable count was correct per line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

What a sweet poem you have composed. I like how you paired the photo with it. With the photo, it almost sounds like the photographer talking to the group.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you!

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Hi,
I'm going to be sure and follow your directions...I need a great big smile for Today!
loved the picture too...Good luck in the contest!
Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you so much!

reply by mrsmajor on 26-May-2023

You're very welcome...My pleasure!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good opening word and positive message
about sharing a smile.
-Good rhyme, and I like the personal touch
at the end addressing Kyle.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-May-2023

You are welcome.