Silentious Sex
Was it her sensual smile?22 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
well that ending was unexpected
this was a great dark poem!
loved the storyline
smooth flow and rhyme
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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well that ending was unexpected
this was a great dark poem!
loved the storyline
smooth flow and rhyme
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you, my friend! I'm happy you like it. That means a bunch!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
WOW! Of course, being a hopeless romantic, I had hoped she turned him around. She did not. He ended her life. This poem is extremely well written, but I still didn't like the ending.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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WOW! Of course, being a hopeless romantic, I had hoped she turned him around. She did not. He ended her life. This poem is extremely well written, but I still didn't like the ending.
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Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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I understand, Barbara! As a romance writer I thank you for looking through the darkness on this one. I just couldn't see another ending for this piece.
