Comment from Elizabeth Henderson

Excellent

I think this is a great write. It tells the story with the little twist at the end. Not easy to do with a 3-5-3 syllable count! I applaud you. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem was cute and funny. I like how you describe nature, then end with "allergies." I can relate. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

I happen to have a major sinus infection right now, so nature and I aren't such good friends - lol.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I also have very bad allergies so I understand. This is a nice poem and it's presented very well. The imagery was bring it to life. Excellent writing!

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thank you. I am in the midst of a horrible allergy attack right now, so nature and I aren't on good terms.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
I like how you rhymed it and I appreciate the theme, being a hay fever sufferer myself!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks, Debra. Having major allergy problems myself at the moment, so not too happy with nature.