Passing Through
Butterflies are such beautiful creatures.3 total reviews
Comment from Frank Malley
"Passing Through" is a poem about an observant individual's delighted moment when she or he sees a butterfly. The visual treat is then described in 3 words, and then "passes through" This last line emphasizes the brevity of the splendid event.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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"Passing Through" is a poem about an observant individual's delighted moment when she or he sees a butterfly. The visual treat is then described in 3 words, and then "passes through" This last line emphasizes the brevity of the splendid event.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely verse for the 5-3-5 Nature prompt. The use of the word 'floating' really enhances this poem and gives it an ethereal quality. Very nice and. I wish you much luck in the contest!
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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This is a lovely verse for the 5-3-5 Nature prompt. The use of the word 'floating' really enhances this poem and gives it an ethereal quality. Very nice and. I wish you much luck in the contest!
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from lancellot
Beautiful
Floating butterfly
Passing through
This is very nice and stunningly accurate. Each line describes different aspects of a butterfly. Even the last line, when you think about how short their lifespan is.
Good work, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Beautiful
Floating butterfly
Passing through
This is very nice and stunningly accurate. Each line describes different aspects of a butterfly. Even the last line, when you think about how short their lifespan is.
Good work, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much
