Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a great entry for the 3-5-3 nature writing prompt contest.
The picture used is perfect to help enhance this thoughtfully composed piece.
The first line draws the reader in to fully appreciate the majestic nature scene and time. Nicely done and best of luck in the completion.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine nature write and those mountains stay with us forever and they are foreboding, strong and magnificent, a fine tribute here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much, Gypsy!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Standing Tall, has the proper formatting and shows the reader the forever mountains that were here long before us and will be here long after we are erased.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much, Bill.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

There is nothing more awe-inspiring than a mountain. None exist around me and I miss them. Indeed they do just "stand tall" their quietly "thwarting time." I like the alliteration of the last three words. Rod

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks so much, Rod!

reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks so much, Rod!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Now that's an interesting observation here in this short format poem, 'thwarting time'and with an alliterative touch,to booth- thanks for sharing these sentiments

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks so much Zanya!

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

A lot is said within these few words. I am a big fan of alliteration so your last line is a gem. Your poem feels like a Haiku - congrats on that imagery.

You selected a good photograph to pair with your contest entry.

Best wishes in the voting.

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks so much, Mark!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

In your words, you invite us to feel the majesty and eternal beauty of mountains. You hand us the world in so few words. This is a beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thank you Ginda!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

They've been there since time began and will be there when the Savior returns. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thanks so much Mike!