Comment from John Cranford

Excellent

What a beautiful poem and illustration. One comment: there appears to be six syllables in your second line. If I'm not mistaken, the word "breezes" has two syllables. If so, you might want to make an adjustment there.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks for reading and sharing-much appreciated.

reply by John Cranford on 26-May-2023

I WAS mistaken. I think your second line has 7 syllables.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I love the delicate creatures flowers attract, like hummingbirds and butterflies. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I like the photo a lot because it sets the stage for your verse about 'flowers in May'. I enjoyed reading this wee 3-5-3 and wish you luck in the contest.

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thanks for reviewing -apology for tardy reply! zanya