Taste of My Reality
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
All I can say is yes, our society has gone crazy. Thank you for sharing.
Yes I'm always constant and always on the go. (comma after 'Yes')
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reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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All I can say is yes, our society has gone crazy. Thank you for sharing.
Yes I'm always constant and always on the go. (comma after 'Yes')
"Airline fuel is expensive.!' (can omit the period)
She replied.
"I'm never going to appear!" (comma after replied and move the dialogue closer)
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you Barbara I didn't get a chance to really edit it it was typed on a bus on my cell phone which is hard to do cuz the bus is bouncing around!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These days stores have all sorts of devices to prevent theft and they are intimidating places to shop nowadays. Gone are the friendly assistants as most of them are sour faced. The world is a very different place from the friendly corner shop mentality when shopkeepers knew their customers personally, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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These days stores have all sorts of devices to prevent theft and they are intimidating places to shop nowadays. Gone are the friendly assistants as most of them are sour faced. The world is a very different place from the friendly corner shop mentality when shopkeepers knew their customers personally, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thanks Dolly and I just posted something sweet written with my two feet?
Doctor Ricky
