Taken/Pt. 1
Revised Sweet Chaos/A Novel of the Breedline series5 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen
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Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
Comment from Heather Bagley
Oooh, and intriguing first chapter! I love twists on werewolf and vampire legends. They're up there in my favorite genres! Keep up the good writing! ~Heather
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Oooh, and intriguing first chapter! I love twists on werewolf and vampire legends. They're up there in my favorite genres! Keep up the good writing! ~Heather
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you, Heather :) So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate your positive feedback and generous stars. I hope you hear from you again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
Okay, you really are a tease!! I have to wait a week now to see what happens? I don't know what your first book was like, but this is excellent. To say I'm looking forward to the next chapter is an understatement!
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Okay, you really are a tease!! I have to wait a week now to see what happens? I don't know what your first book was like, but this is excellent. To say I'm looking forward to the next chapter is an understatement!
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Awww... Thank you, Mary :) You definitely made my day! This is the stuff that keeps me writing. You have no idea how much this means to me.
The suspense will be worth the wait. Bless you!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
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You are very welcome. I always look forward to the next chapters.
Comment from Shirley McLain
OK, I need the next chapter immediately. How will Tessa get out of this? I assume Sebestian will take her to his dad. You did an excellent job. Hurry with the next chapter, please. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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OK, I need the next chapter immediately. How will Tessa get out of this? I assume Sebestian will take her to his dad. You did an excellent job. Hurry with the next chapter, please. Shirley
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you, Shirley :) So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter! Yes, Sebastian is not the good half-brother to Jace and Jem. Now that he's taken Tessa, things are not going to get intense. And when Jace finds out, it's not going to be pretty.
I appreciate the awesome review.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
Wow! This is a spectacular episode with Tessa now in Sebastian's car boot, or trunk as American's call it. I wonder what he wants with her. Perhaps they want to lure Jace to their sinister place of residence, to meet the parent of Jace, Jem and Sebastian. And also Jace has rushed off to an urgent meeting with Tim. Things are hotting up. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Wow! This is a spectacular episode with Tessa now in Sebastian's car boot, or trunk as American's call it. I wonder what he wants with her. Perhaps they want to lure Jace to their sinister place of residence, to meet the parent of Jace, Jem and Sebastian. And also Jace has rushed off to an urgent meeting with Tim. Things are hotting up. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you, dear friend :) I appreciate the awesome review! Yes, things are going to get intense. Sebastian has taken Tessa for her Breedline blood for Eve. But when Jace finds out, it's not going to be pretty.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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I agree
