Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Night Man"A compilation of poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
You used the required words in a good way. Your poem is creative and conveys a strong image and feeling. I like how you took the POV of the victim. Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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You used the required words in a good way. Your poem is creative and conveys a strong image and feeling. I like how you took the POV of the victim. Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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Andrea thank you so much for this fine review for your fine rating I appreciate it so much! As well as your time and your insight I am als8
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Have you seen the new movie called, 'Renfield'?
He is Dracula's henchman. It's pretty funny.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Have you seen the new movie called, 'Renfield'?
He is Dracula's henchman. It's pretty funny.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your review I appreciate it! I haven't seen renfield although i've seen many versions of dracula and know who Renfield is lol.
Thank you for your comments for your time I hope your day is awesome!
Comment from Lorinda lee Boyer
Yikes! and Wow! Fun to read, love the rhythm. Makes me pretty glad I'm not a vampire because, you know, blood... ick. Great image, great poem, loved it!
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Yikes! and Wow! Fun to read, love the rhythm. Makes me pretty glad I'm not a vampire because, you know, blood... ick. Great image, great poem, loved it!
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much I'm glad you liked that and thank you for your fine rating. I appreciate your comments and time to hope your evening is grand!
Comment from papa55mike
An interesting vampire poem about the total control evil can have over you. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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An interesting vampire poem about the total control evil can have over you. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much Mike! i'm so glad you liked it! I so appreciate your insightful review and your comments as well. I hope that your evening is grand thank you again!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Powerful rhyming verse of violence and subjugation, creating death. Particularly chilling: "mutant teeth life's blood you drain." A darkly narrated tale! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Powerful rhyming verse of violence and subjugation, creating death. Particularly chilling: "mutant teeth life's blood you drain." A darkly narrated tale! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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I thank you for your kind review and for your comments and for your kind rating my thanks!
I hope you enjoy your day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a scary write about a vampire lurking in an undead state and terrorising women in the dead of night, I wish you luck with the contest, good end rhymes here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Oh my goodness this is a scary write about a vampire lurking in an undead state and terrorising women in the dead of night, I wish you luck with the contest, good end rhymes here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much jelly. I appreciate your time and effort and sayvorite kind comments I am equally appreciative. I hope you have a wonderful day thank you again!
