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Ancient Art of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Blooming May"
A compilation of poems

8 total reviews 
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I like this 5/7/5 about the Ranunculus flowers. They are so pretty. I also like the alliteration you used here in this short poem.

Yes. They are eye candies.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 18-May-2023
    Thank you so much i'm pleased and proud thank you again that's so great! For your generous review thank you very much!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Excellent
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Nice post with an enticing photo reminiscent of the spring season. Great choice of words, specially 'eye candy'.
There is a slight mistake with the word' ranunculous - there is no letter 'O' in it.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 18-May-2023
    Thank you Mario for your congratulation. Thanks for pointing that out to now appreciate your time and your kind comment! Also for your fine rating too I hope your day is great And the sun is shining where you are!
Comment from Julie Lau
Excellent
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OMG to see so much magnificent petally eye candy in one place - I don't think I could stand it! If set the task of picking them, I would soon become drunk with their gaudy beauty!

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 17-May-2023
    You lay you are such a poet thank you so much for your review! I waited appreciate it Appreciate your comments to gorgeous! For your time thank you so much I hope the sun is shining where you're at!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Excellent
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Hello dear poet, this is a very
creative use of words,
I really love the "fields of
eye candy" My very best wishes for the contest. This
is a strong contender.
Good luckâ??ï¸?

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 17-May-2023
    I appreciate your kind words and review! Thank you! Hope your day is grand!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Excellent
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This image displays a multitude of color. Beauty bestows the meadow for miles and miles. Are these flowers known as zinnias? They are a super sturdy flower.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 17-May-2023
    Ranunculus is the Latin name for but so close. Thank you for your review so glad you like it! As well and you're fine writing I am grateful! I hope that your day is wonderful
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Do you mean Ranunculus here in your flower write? Or maybe this is the American spelling? That photograph is amazing and I loved your words, eye candy indeed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 17-May-2023
    Yes thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. I'm glad you liked the words you. I'm grateful for your time and for your review thank you again!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
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Excellent haiku entry for the 5/7/5 flower contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 17-May-2023
    Thank you I'm really glad you like it very much appreciating it. And for your time and your review is always. I am happy to receive I hope your day is grand!
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
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'fields of eye candy' is a wonderfully descriptive line... those flowers sure do look sweetly luscious.

Comment:
In the top line, pettled should be more correctly written as petalled or petaled, depending where you live (British or US English), as it pertains to a flower's petals.

 Comment Written 16-May-2023


reply by the author on 16-May-2023
    Yes very good thank you for catching up and thank you also For your review. I'm glad you liked it and for your comments always a plus!
    Hope you have a great day!