We Don't Know All But We Owe All
Freedom isn't free, they paid for it30 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for honoring our service men and women with your writing. A good reminder that freedom isn't free so we never forget those who paid the price, for us and our country.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for honoring our service men and women with your writing. A good reminder that freedom isn't free so we never forget those who paid the price, for us and our country.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hello there!
I really enjoyed your poem. Simple yet very meaningful. This picture is awesome too and the fact you incorporated it into the poem is great. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey!
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hello there!
I really enjoyed your poem. Simple yet very meaningful. This picture is awesome too and the fact you incorporated it into the poem is great. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey!
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Aussie
Doesn't matter that the meters suck. I don't worry about this - like you have done, write from the heart. This year in Australia, we had the biggest turnout ever to remember the fallen. K XX
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Doesn't matter that the meters suck. I don't worry about this - like you have done, write from the heart. This year in Australia, we had the biggest turnout ever to remember the fallen. K XX
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Spitfire
This should be read aloud at a Memorial Day ceremony. I didn't know about Battlefield Crosses. An artistic tribute to those who fought for the freedom we have today.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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This should be read aloud at a Memorial Day ceremony. I didn't know about Battlefield Crosses. An artistic tribute to those who fought for the freedom we have today.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Yes, let's remember the brave fallen this Memorial Day. I like that you are writing from the heart. You correctly identified the issue with meter. Rhyming, for the most part, was solid. With a little more love and attention, I think you could make this poem shine. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Yes, let's remember the brave fallen this Memorial Day. I like that you are writing from the heart. You correctly identified the issue with meter. Rhyming, for the most part, was solid. With a little more love and attention, I think you could make this poem shine. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a great entry for the contest. It is written from the perspective of one who has been there, but by the grace of God made it back home, when others did not. A great tribute to those who fought for freedom.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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What a great entry for the contest. It is written from the perspective of one who has been there, but by the grace of God made it back home, when others did not. A great tribute to those who fought for freedom.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You are very welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a well rhymed poem in honor of those who died for our freedom.
We should always remember to that them for their sacrifice for us. I like how you incorporate the picture into your poem. Or, was this poem ekphrastic?
I think there should be a comma after feeling in the first line.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contetst.
Enjoy your day.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi,
This is a well rhymed poem in honor of those who died for our freedom.
We should always remember to that them for their sacrifice for us. I like how you incorporate the picture into your poem. Or, was this poem ekphrastic?
I think there should be a comma after feeling in the first line.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contetst.
Enjoy your day.
Joan
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Joan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine well rhymed write and I adore the sentiments for this memorial day when the soldiers are remembered with fondness and respect, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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A fine well rhymed write and I adore the sentiments for this memorial day when the soldiers are remembered with fondness and respect, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from royowen
I doubt somehow that the cause of war is always freedom, sometimes we invade countries because we don't like their moral values, invasion is still invasion, (we wouldn't invade Russia or China would we?) to interfere with their internal politics, which rarely works, I site Vietnam and Afghanistan. It's like us being invaded for the same reason. But that's not the fault of soldiers, and they should be honoured, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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I doubt somehow that the cause of war is always freedom, sometimes we invade countries because we don't like their moral values, invasion is still invasion, (we wouldn't invade Russia or China would we?) to interfere with their internal politics, which rarely works, I site Vietnam and Afghanistan. It's like us being invaded for the same reason. But that's not the fault of soldiers, and they should be honoured, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from shelley kaye
"We Don't Know All Bur We Owe All" <-- typo? did you mean BUT?
this was a great memorial poem for our fallen...
one suggestion i have if i may, is maybe try a black background and a yellow or orange font to blend with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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"We Don't Know All Bur We Owe All" <-- typo? did you mean BUT?
this was a great memorial poem for our fallen...
one suggestion i have if i may, is maybe try a black background and a yellow or orange font to blend with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much Shelley. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
