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We Don't Know All But We Owe All

Freedom isn't free, they paid for it

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this remembrance contest entry with us. I'm just wondering as I read, how many Americans in today's society even know what Memorial Day represents. I doubt very many. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
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I couldn't agree more with your well written poem. My dad was a WW2 vet, one of the lucky ones that came back. Solider then were commended, not spit upon. We wouldn't be free without all that they sacrificed. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from karenina
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God Bless you and all who have participated in this contest while honoring and remembering our fallen. In a world where "traditions" seem to be eroding and Memorial Day often means "Hot Dogs and Beer" this reflective poem hit home. Your meter is fine...it has the same beat as every grateful heart.

Karenina

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much, Karenina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by karenina on 19-May-2023
    Blessings to you!
Comment from Janel Mock
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Thank you for your service. I very much appreciate your thoughts and feelings in this poem. I pray for anyone and everyone that has lost someone in the service. Thank you for sharing this poem. God bless! ~Janel

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much, Janel. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem and the six beautiful stars you honored me with.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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as the husband of an army vet, who has served abroad with many military people, and taught for three years military soldiers, I can relate to this heart felt tribute to those who paid the ultimate sacrifice.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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They ARE the reason we are free. As we go about our daily lives, we must remember there were those who paid a great price for our freedom to come and go as we please. I thank YOU for being one who sacrificed your time, putting your life in jeopardy in the military. Thank you also for this powerful message. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the Memorial Day In Poetry contest. It's a fine tribute to our military, specially our veterans. The rhyme and meter is perfect. Goodluck!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much, Gypsy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Really well done poem. A great tribute to the fallen soldiers. I saw the remake of the movie 'Midway' and realized what a huge sacrifice those pilots made, they knew they would not come back but went anyway. Such amazing courage. We don't appreciate them enough. Great poem, hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem and the six beautiful stars you honored me with.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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This is a truly heartfelt piece of poetry. Way too many of our soldiers are lost. Without them, though, we would all be living very different lives. I was blessed to have a father and father-in-law that both served in Korea and made it home. My brother-in-law was also Army, and my brother was career Navy. Two of my kids were Jr. ROTC in high school. Everyone is safe at home, thankfully, but my prayers go out to those not home and those that will never be. Your poem is a somber reminder about the debt we all owe to these wonderful people.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem and the six beautiful stars you honored me with.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I think the message you share
and honoring out fallen heroes is
much more important than meter,
and I don't see a real problem with it, either.
-The line about the "helmet, boots, and an upside-down rifle
is a poignant one. These men and women gave
the ultimate sacrifice, and it is important
to remember them and value what they did because
"They're the reason we are all free."
-A very good entry; good luck, and thank you for caring.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem and the six beautiful stars you honored me with.
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-May-2023
    You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review.
reply by Pam (respa) on 20-May-2023
    You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Earl. An excellent poem.