Beware
Of The Wolf In Disguise30 total reviews
Comment from karenina
This is an unusual contest and it's nice to see new challenges and ideas come to the forefront. Working around predetermined end rhymes will (I'm hoping) present us all with many varied themes and "takes" on how to approach this. You've created a mood and held this reader's interest. Good luck!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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This is an unusual contest and it's nice to see new challenges and ideas come to the forefront. Working around predetermined end rhymes will (I'm hoping) present us all with many varied themes and "takes" on how to approach this. You've created a mood and held this reader's interest. Good luck!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
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You're so welcome!
Comment from Janel Mock
I love the route you took with this. They are very true words and a lot of people could benefit from reading this piece! Thank you so much for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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I love the route you took with this. They are very true words and a lot of people could benefit from reading this piece! Thank you so much for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this borrowed rhyme contest entry with us. I have no clue what borrowed rhyme is. I know what rhyme is and rhyming and near rhyming scheme is very good. It's the borrowed part that had me confused. But I did enjoy reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing this borrowed rhyme contest entry with us. I have no clue what borrowed rhyme is. I know what rhyme is and rhyming and near rhyming scheme is very good. It's the borrowed part that had me confused. But I did enjoy reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you, Barbara! The "borrowed rhyme" is the last word of each line. The contest rules were to write an 8 line rhyming poem in which the rhyming words are given to you. Then end each line in their specific order. I'm sure you are not alone, it's confusing- I appreciate your comment I will add the rules to the author notes! Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Mercedes Weathers
Has an air of scariness as it communicates some lurking evil in deceptive people looking for prey amongst those who are more na�¯ve. The painting goes nicely with the words too because it portrays a young girl who seems to be almost sleeping.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Has an air of scariness as it communicates some lurking evil in deceptive people looking for prey amongst those who are more na�¯ve. The painting goes nicely with the words too because it portrays a young girl who seems to be almost sleeping.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thanks
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I like the rhyming scheme has been decided for you to start with. I had to look at the word "feign" though. You wrote a good poem that utilizes these words. It's not a easy task.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Yes. I like the rhyming scheme has been decided for you to start with. I had to look at the word "feign" though. You wrote a good poem that utilizes these words. It's not a easy task.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a wonderful piece of poetry with a very nice flow. It also serves as a strong warning to be careful of people at face value. That selection of art work is brilliant! It is so creepy looking and works well with your poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry with a very nice flow. It also serves as a strong warning to be careful of people at face value. That selection of art work is brilliant! It is so creepy looking and works well with your poem.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and requirements.
-You do a good job giving advice of things to avoid,
and the consequence that would ensue if you didn't.
-The required rhymes fit in well, too.
-I agree with your premise, "more danger in silence..."
-The last two lines also make a very good point.
-I appreciate all the thought you put into this.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and requirements.
-You do a good job giving advice of things to avoid,
and the consequence that would ensue if you didn't.
-The required rhymes fit in well, too.
-I agree with your premise, "more danger in silence..."
-The last two lines also make a very good point.
-I appreciate all the thought you put into this.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam! I appreciate your feedback and I am honored by the stars!
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the rules for the contest. It is clear and concise. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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This poem meets the rules for the contest. It is clear and concise. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful read, yes, there those out there that prey upon others and try to exploit their weaknesses, this is an excellent message and very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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What a wonderful read, yes, there those out there that prey upon others and try to exploit their weaknesses, this is an excellent message and very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem entry for the Borrowed Rhyme contest.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Excellent poem entry for the Borrowed Rhyme contest.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy!
