Beware
Of The Wolf In Disguise30 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very good post, it is fluid even with the imposed ending words. The subject matter is serious and the poem constructed in a powerful read. Molestation, ripping innocent lives are more common than people think. I like your line: More danger in silence, than words that might scare.
Great job!!
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Very good post, it is fluid even with the imposed ending words. The subject matter is serious and the poem constructed in a powerful read. Molestation, ripping innocent lives are more common than people think. I like your line: More danger in silence, than words that might scare.
Great job!!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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I appreciate your feedback, Mario! Xo
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Creative way of using the required words. This made me think of a warning that is handed out by a witch in a play to the main character. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Creative way of using the required words. This made me think of a warning that is handed out by a witch in a play to the main character. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you! I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've said many times, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But as a lover of words, dark secrets, and crimson feelings splattered on a page, you've grabbed my undivided attention yet again.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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As I've said many times, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But as a lover of words, dark secrets, and crimson feelings splattered on a page, you've grabbed my undivided attention yet again.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate that! Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Beware, is different in that the end words have been unilaterally established and bend the theme to the dark side. I think you have used them well here to capitalize on these conditions. The theme of the predator "Preying on the credence of (the) naive..." comes through.
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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This poem, Beware, is different in that the end words have been unilaterally established and bend the theme to the dark side. I think you have used them well here to capitalize on these conditions. The theme of the predator "Preying on the credence of (the) naive..." comes through.
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thanks, Bill! I appreciate the feedback- i?ll make that edit.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are concerning, descriptive and creative. I like the
title of this poem and I feel especially today we must Be Aware of the Wolf
in Disguise as the author states above the title. I like how this author bolded the words that were important to notice. The poem gives good
advice. The artwork goes well with these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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The author's words are concerning, descriptive and creative. I like the
title of this poem and I feel especially today we must Be Aware of the Wolf
in Disguise as the author states above the title. I like how this author bolded the words that were important to notice. The poem gives good
advice. The artwork goes well with these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Harmony!
Comment from Yardier
Most exceptional delivery of the threat that breaths down one's neck.
The subtle imagery of the wolf eyeing the sleeping, sweating innocent woman brings a darker image to the construct of the poem.
Very well done
All the best, Yard.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Most exceptional delivery of the threat that breaths down one's neck.
The subtle imagery of the wolf eyeing the sleeping, sweating innocent woman brings a darker image to the construct of the poem.
Very well done
All the best, Yard.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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THANK you! I truly appreciate your feedback and insightful review!
Xo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm always impressed when someone has the skill to follow this kind of brief. It can't be easy but this verse has certainly achieved success with its portrayal of the wolf in disguise. Quite a haunting message warning the reader of the dangers of naivety, silence and lack of curiosity. I'm not sure about the last line making a lot of sense to me and feel that this is the only place where the rhyming became a little forced. But good job and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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I'm always impressed when someone has the skill to follow this kind of brief. It can't be easy but this verse has certainly achieved success with its portrayal of the wolf in disguise. Quite a haunting message warning the reader of the dangers of naivety, silence and lack of curiosity. I'm not sure about the last line making a lot of sense to me and feel that this is the only place where the rhyming became a little forced. But good job and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Debbie, thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate your honesty about that last line- I understand what you mean and I think I agree with you. I'll revise the line. Thank you for pointing that out! Xo
Comment from Wendy G
Good work - I don't think those words were very easy to use, but you have created a poem with depth and meaning, Excellent choice of artwork to accompany your work. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Good work - I don't think those words were very easy to use, but you have created a poem with depth and meaning, Excellent choice of artwork to accompany your work. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from G0dd0ll
Whoa! I'm getting some nice readings tonite. This must've been a hard write! What a nice job you've done with it. It didn't say all at the end but they do rhyme & all. Wow...I like this.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Whoa! I'm getting some nice readings tonite. This must've been a hard write! What a nice job you've done with it. It didn't say all at the end but they do rhyme & all. Wow...I like this.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback and stars!! :)
Comment from Boogienights
This is the first I've seen of these, and I'd have to say that yours is terrific. It makes sense and is very timely, with how the world is going these days. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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This is the first I've seen of these, and I'd have to say that yours is terrific. It makes sense and is very timely, with how the world is going these days. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate that!
