Forces
Mysterious Crossing of Paths19 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I found the
poem thought provoking and pondered on the meaning. The artwork
is awesome and goes well with these words. Great poem!
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I found the
poem thought provoking and pondered on the meaning. The artwork
is awesome and goes well with these words. Great poem!
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
Sometimes it's funny how two completely diverse units can be both compatible and unified in purpose and philosophy, both bring something unique to the table, but unified and in agreement in direction, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Sometimes it's funny how two completely diverse units can be both compatible and unified in purpose and philosophy, both bring something unique to the table, but unified and in agreement in direction, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
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A pleasure
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I very much enjoyed the woven thread metaphor you created here. Sometimes those "chance" encounters do seem a predetermined part of a larger design. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
-Chuck
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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I very much enjoyed the woven thread metaphor you created here. Sometimes those "chance" encounters do seem a predetermined part of a larger design. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
-Chuck
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you for your perceptive review, Chuck!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I read your poem several times to enjoy to your words. They really do evoke a mood of mystery and promise. An unknown design that somehow we know is going to be good. Lovely.
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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I read your poem several times to enjoy to your words. They really do evoke a mood of mystery and promise. An unknown design that somehow we know is going to be good. Lovely.
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is thought provoking. I read it more than once and put a few meanings to it. It is beautifully written and the graphic is part of the food for thought. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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This is thought provoking. I read it more than once and put a few meanings to it. It is beautifully written and the graphic is part of the food for thought. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you, Nicki!
Comment from zanya
It's a sentiment expressed here worth pondering as to how life events occur or is simply a matter of 'woven serendipity'- an intriguing possibility- thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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It's a sentiment expressed here worth pondering as to how life events occur or is simply a matter of 'woven serendipity'- an intriguing possibility- thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the threads and design.
-You tie each part of the poem together with
the closing line and "woven serendipity."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the threads and design.
-You tie each part of the poem together with
the closing line and "woven serendipity."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very skilfully done! The threads symbolising two lives meeting together with uncertain destiny forming a union of chance and fateful coincidence. Your words obviously much better than mine. Yours contained in this tightly structured verse form. An excellent and imaginative post and strong contender for this contest. Well done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Very skilfully done! The threads symbolising two lives meeting together with uncertain destiny forming a union of chance and fateful coincidence. Your words obviously much better than mine. Yours contained in this tightly structured verse form. An excellent and imaginative post and strong contender for this contest. Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Debbie!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this clever write as it is full of mystery and curiosity and it is inventive and entertaining too, I wish you luck with the contest, this could be a winner, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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I love this clever write as it is full of mystery and curiosity and it is inventive and entertaining too, I wish you luck with the contest, this could be a winner, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you Dolly!
